| Reviews for Her Max |
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Guest chapter 1 . 5/30 Frollo was the one that bombed the car of Max and Ruby's parents and killed them both |
69RoobyBoobie chapter 1 . 5/1 A couple of my friends and I share a tradition where we read fan-fictions inspired by childhood TV shows. This was by far the worst one I have ever come across. My colleagues agree, the spacing, pacing and wording was absolutely sickening to say the least. However, I understand that this may be a healthy therapy excerise! Reading this for pleasure unfortunately I was quite and thoroughly disappointed. Another complaint I must bring up is the lack of climax! Where is the pizazz? I personally believe this could have dove even deeper with the dynamic between the two bunnies, Max and Ruby. I don’t mean to offend anyone involved in this creation. I believe everyone has the right to their own creativity.. but all due respect- this sucked. I will be rewriting this for my own satisfaction for my own sense of clarity. With regards, 69RoobyBoobie$ |
Guest chapter 1 . 4/9/2018 Frickin' awesome I cried a little |
zanderman02 chapter 1 . 6/7/2017 Best story I've heard In a while I just recently got hooked to Max and Ruby too |
Guest chapter 1 . 12/9/2016 fuck |
veronica.toon.7 chapter 1 . 6/15/2016 That was very sweet. I've always wondered where their parents were all this time. I loved this entire story and it was well-written and thought out,. Nice job. |
Guest chapter 1 . 8/9/2015 V had placed a bomb in the car max and ruby's parents |
Guest chapter 1 . 7/25/2015 Darth Vader saved Ruby after she got stuck under her house. |
Guest chapter 1 . 5/21/2014 the phantom and ruby |
Steel Celestial chapter 1 . 7/25/2013 You know, I never watched Max and Ruby when I was younger. I really started watching it because of my niece and was curious if there were any stories on it. I'm not going to lie, I went looking for them with low expectations as most kids shows that are made into fan fiction are very poorly done and creepy pasta like. I would like to just say you blew me away! The way you captured Ruby's emotions about the whole thing and about how she had to grow up in such a short time was beautifully done. I love the way you write, I really felt for Ruby and just how you expressed them. As far as back stories go, to quote Siskel and Ebert, I give this two thumbs up! |
Deviant Crew chapter 1 . 5/11/2013 Excellent work! |
sakuradancer3 chapter 1 . 2/29/2012 Fabulously written. Honestly. I love Max and Ruby, though I am...-gulp- an adult.I would love to see some more Max and Rub stories...maybe we could even get a section made for it. Anyway, thanks for the story. It was the right mix of stream of consciousness and affection and sadness...it was beautiful. Maybe, though, the next one could Be a little lighter? Maybe a RubyxRoger story? Thanks! :-) Jeffrianne aka Sakuradancer3 |
Gelado Pocket-mouse chapter 1 . 10/23/2011 So cute! |
Calm-Waters chapter 1 . 8/22/2011 Awwhhh! That was such a lovely story! Oh, I loved it! You made perfect harmony of all my thoughts on Max and Ruby! Completely :D |
mewmewrock chapter 1 . 6/16/2011 Bravo! You never see stories like these... I love how it was all from rubys point of view. Her love for her brother is truly beautiful... I can't wait to see more of this! Make more max and ruby stories please! Oh by the way, I wanted to know if you consider hamtaro as a baby show :) Thanks for writing! _ |