cloud has two girlfriends the second one is tifa now astrid smirking at her boyfriend hiccup haddock hey i am going to be your wife

Oh. My. Gosh. This was so captivating! I couldn't stop reading! The use of feeling and emotion! This is not like other fanfics I've read, this is a work of literature! Wushu, you are a great author AND illustrator, the pictures are so vivid iny head from the words I have just read! Amazed I have been, now astound with your writing!

Damn that was good

So beautiful, I love it so much. Nice job, a bit sad (you brought me into tears) but amazing job

It is really sad and it almost made me cry. But it is also very, very good. Thank you for writing this beautiful story :)

Everything Hiccup said to Astrid in the last few parts of the story is so sad. So sad that when I read it, it felt like it was real.

The whole conversation is like travelling through the wires of my headphones and into my ears as if I was watching the whole conversation take place.

I could definitely feel Hiccup's sadness. Everything he said was true in some point. Yes, in the movie his father did forgive him but reading this story just added a new perspective to everything. The way Hiccup said those lines really felt like he got it right out from his heart.

Although, in one line where Astrid was talking, I couldn't help but think that Hiccup could actually brought the conversation farther. Not that it was really necessary considering that this is already a one-shot with 10k words.

(The part I'm talking about is the one where Astrid asked Hiccup to somewhat marry her.)(It sounded to me as if Astrid is only willing to marry Hiccup just to pay the debts of how the vikings treated Hiccup before he killed the "Red Death".)

As my final review, I find this story well-written and thought of very well. I just suggest that if you could make the transition of the POVs a little smoother. (Even though most of it was in Astrid's POV.)

Either way I'll give you a 5 out of 5. ) Hope you make more great stories.

Oh my god. That was so beautiful. I have tears in my eyes right now.

this is way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, way, too sad

It is still very, very, very, very, very ,very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very ,very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very ,very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very ,very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very ,very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very ,very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very ,very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very ,very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very ,very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very ,very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very ,very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very ,very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very ,very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very,
good

I absolutely loved it! Very well written!

As he softly spoke into the wind, the words and sound stolen to heaven above. That's supposed to say and sound stolen to Valhalla above since it is pertaining to Vikings.

D'aawwwww I loved it!

So much emotion in one chapter! This is fantastic, the description inspired, I loved every second of reading! And what's more, you kept everything real - I believed every word.

Thank you for writing such awesomeness,

Kikwoka x

In the sweet name of Frigga, this...is...awesome! :D

Wow! This was really good!

Great job. A lot of emotion in this story. I'll admit I cried. I love it.

Whoa that was great