If your goal was to make me cry, you've succeeded. That was so good.

These are brilliant. Well done! :)

The old Morgana :)

I love seeing parts of her, like when we get flashes on the show, but they are few and far between, so I am glad I have your fics to fill in the gaps.

It was a lovely way to end the fic. Both positive and negative at the same time. Positive in the way Morgana has a heart in there somewhere and loved Merlin too, but negative in the way she can never have that life back.

Oh, Morgana's perspective. That was an excited 'oh' by the way, not a disappointed mutter. It is hard to convey tone through a keyboard.

This could be a one shot. Like if you made it longer, it certainly has potential to be more than a poem. I can just picture it, and it would be a powerful moment, like when she was told she's like Uther.

I actually liked this one (not that I'm surprised at that, the tone was a response to your concerns that this one was not as good as the others). I liked the memories, they gave the impression of something ghost like and haunting, like the past would always be there, lingering.

There was something about the last two lines I really liked, I'm not sure why I just did. They sort of paralleled one another, I don't know if that's the right word but it's the one I'm going to use for want of a better one. I also liked the repetition, the circular narrative brought the piece to some sort of close, yet left it open because there can never really be a conclusion or closure to this and the repetition captured that because like circles, it's closed but never ends (I've been spending way too much time on Top Girls, now to ruin my analysis with the language of the chav) do you get me?

Indeed what did happen. I loved the last line, it was somewhat unexpected and sweet (in a tragic way). It really captured the transformation of Morgana from this sweet, albeit annoying, woman to someone worse than those she is trying to avenge.

After he poisoned me, I can't remember when I last smiled.

Oh how I loved that last line! I loved the way you wrote from morgana's point of view. What you have said is true really, since the poisoning she hasn't ever really been happy. Nice job!

this is defs accurate

i sometimes think that morgana became evil because of some massive misunderstandings

Aww, I really liked the last line. I've always rooted for Morgana/Merlin, I think they would make such a sweet couple. Or at least they would have done.

I also liked the line about a blood red cloak and evil in mind, as you are well aware red symbolises danger (ah, the days of OMAM).

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Good job, but I think you should stay away from repeating slightly different variations of the same line so many times..

Wow. Simply beautiful. Merlin's confusion prevails throughout the whole poem, and so much sadness in the last line sent shivers up my spine (in the good way). The sense of bitterness makes this last line more effective, as it seems helpless compared to the rest of the poem. I love it :D