Loved it , I’m giving you a solo round of applause right now.

This is going to be rough.

ohh boii..

oh shiet

Lol, luffy thought he had to be kissed by zoro. This fic randomly became some kind of LuNa lemon or something. This fic was so sad thooooo. DONT YOU EVER DIE YOU LOVABLE RUBBER IDIOT! I LOVE THIS FIC.

damn i loved it

damn this story has me in tears! very very good

very good

This story had a great ending. It pulled my heart to breaking point during the chapters the crew were saying their respects to him. Hell I was trying hard not to cry myself! It was so moving hearing them say how much they appreciate what he did for them!

lol if this was really true wouldn't all whitebeards men kiss him during midnight at marineford lmao

So...all chapters will end with "damn it!"?
Might as well make that the title, author-san

All you want to do is give them a hug.

first you made me, cry how dare you ?! at the end i was kinda-.. the feeling of.. ahm ! no need to describe my current satiation XD but seriously i LOVED your story ! you were amazing *_* good job on writing this awesome fic ! really shipping LuNa soon~ hard

This fanfic was great!
I was so sad at the beginning. It just made me think again about the horrible possibility of Luffy dying at the end of One Piece (after becoming pirate king). It's just too depressing. T.T
Thankfully, in your story he got revived again and was able to find out about love (and sex xxD). .

Good work!

P.S. There are some typing errors, POV errors and you tend to switch between time tenses (e.g. 'What was I supposed to do? This WAS so confusing' - not 'This IS so confusing.' Since your writing in the past, you have to write everything in past tense except in direct speech. ;3)

yu yu hakusho one piece style lol!