Reviews for Bella Nemica
PumpkinSpice0112 chapter 1 . 6/26/2017
I don't know what influenced me to search for thus pairing, but I don't regret it at all. Ezio on the bottom is a rare, but beautiful thing.
Black Bloody Rose Dragon chapter 1 . 4/25/2015
That was hot nice job enemies as lovers
Hack Generation chapter 1 . 10/7/2014
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i just
I JUST CANT
FLUFFY SEX IS FLUFFYYYYYYYY
OMFG
THIS MAH NEW OTP
AAAAHHH YEEAAAAUUHHH
MORNIN SEKS
Naic chapter 1 . 2/20/2013
Very ardente, indeed! Thanks for sharing
Lukaheim chapter 1 . 2/12/2013
Is it creepy that I guessed the title was beautiful enemy? Mindfuck for me there. The story was great and I can't wait to see what you do next!
darkmoonlady chapter 1 . 9/6/2012
Nice fic
Friendly darkmoonlady
myyaoibetch chapter 1 . 9/6/2011
Nice little one shot, but I think I would've liked it more if I actually knew Italian. I'd suggest putting translations at the bottom in an A/N.
whitebengal14 chapter 1 . 4/24/2011
I like the fact that this fic is about Assassin's Creed. and porn. What more could I want? :D

I enjoyed looking up the italian phrases on Google's translator thing. I learned a few phrases in Italian because of that. :D

Unfortunately, I didn't enjoy the clicheness and the uncreativeness. The sex scene was written like everyone elses' and the phrases Ezio said was completely out of character. These irritated me to no end.

There wasn't a lot of background for why and how Ezio and Cesare came to be together, which was disappointing as well. D: In order to really go far on this site I recommend you being more creative when it comes to your writings?

I hate to be rude and/or mean but I see some promises in your writing. Your detail is pretty good and i'm sure if you come up with a good, creative plot, you could get more reviewers and possibly, your ego stroked to. ;P

As this fic is right now? Not so much ego stroking.

I mean, sure, you'll always get the fangirls who don't care what's in a story, as long as there's sex, but i'm sure that if you're a serious writer who cares about her work (or his work) you'll probably want to be more... creative?

Once again, I'm sorry if I offended you with my review. D:

If it makes you feel better in any way, I'd like to see more from you. Maybe more Ezio and Cesare. With some creativity?

I wish you luck in your future fics~
MazlanD chapter 1 . 4/23/2011
:D Awesome, very hot, but i would suggest next time that you first describe the scene, i was first imaging Cesare with all his armour on as if he had just snuck into Ezio bedroom, then it was clear he didn't have any clothes on, so it was a bit confusing there.
Aerlinnn chapter 1 . 3/9/2011
I am not a great fa. Of M rated fanfics, but I really liked how you wrote this! It is so good D

Keep it up! _
Orochimarisu chapter 1 . 3/6/2011
I'll let you know what I think..

OMNOMNOMNOM~!

This was seriously well written!