Lol. Sakuno sure is perky in this story of yours. I like her character although I'm kinda irritated and somewhat annoyed at some aspects of her personality. Because at some parts, she's making a huge deal out of a mole hill. And that did tick me OFF. Other than that, I'd have to say that I don't approve of your writing format. The text shouldn't be placed across the center division. Rather, it should be aligned on the far left side of the page. Moreover, while it's kinda comical, the use of emoticons within a story rather than putting them into words is a tad bit disconcerting. I mean, why write when you're just going to illustrate? Don't get me wrong. I'm not a master in writing or whatever. In the contrary, I used to do that too when I was in my late Elementary years (lol) but then I learned that it's not a sight much welcomed to a reader's eyes.

My only negative remark other than those shown above is the grammatical errors. Firstly, I noticed that you seem to mistake clauses for sentences. For example: "She immediately went away. Even my brain went away." Unless your brain is damaged (and I'm perfectly sure yours is not), I'm pretty certain you got the point. Secondly, using the same text shown in the quotation, you tend to become redundant some of the times.

But then again, it is after all a point of view written in first-person of a bumbling teenager so I guess that must be taken into account and some of the errors be blamed to the teenager's intellect. Nonetheless, i suggest you find and edit them to a better piece.

Honestly, I thought that Sakuno would literally fall in love with a robot. Lol. The title is after all what mostly intrigued me to read your story. It somehow reminded me of the drama entitled "Zettai no Kareshi" (correct me if I'm mistaken lol). I'm kinda disappointed yet your storyline sort of made up for it anyway lol. Anyway, enough of my ranting. I'm sure you'd have grown tired of it for a while now. Do continue writing and updating! I will wait for your next update.

Before I forget, I just want to say thank you for the good read. So yeah.

Kisses,
Yesterday's Secrets

Ryosaku...love...foerever...
Love-it...it-was-really-amazing...
Please-update-soon...

Please align your paragraphs on the left. It's quite hard reading it when it's aligned on the center (just like how poems are written).

woah..nice.:D you updated!ARIGATO :DD..thanks for mentioning me but you dont have to..update early ok?

aahhh..it's awesome!i like the behavior of Ryoma here and also Sakuno,,esp. those signs that she's been thinking about...keep it up!Ganbatte! n_n

whoa! a very nice story... wahhaha... seriously horio is soooo stupid...

its ryosaku fic again.. yay!

anyways... plz update quickly.. ganbare...

hi iceprincess016 XD

The story is good but it's getting boring since it's like one long introduction and obviously the story needs [an] antagonist/s. I can see a few typos and grammar errors so get someone to proofread your story first before you publish it :) But it's good so keep on updating :D

keep up the good work!you're title catch my attention...heheh

honestly,,,it's fun reading your story...i hope i can read the next chapter and i better wait it!just LOVE your story!

i thought that in the 1st part you would share your own story but then when i read all through out...it's the start of the story...but well...it was good!n_n

Okay Chapter 2.

Here's what we've been waiting for.. Sakuno's actually looking for Ryoma.. looks like he's not exhausted from 'his continues running through her head'and what's this? I think I smell the stench of concern from Sakuno? Hahaha! It get's better and better.. *evil laughs*

Haha! What's up with the dude who loves mirrors? haha! And Horio, the guy you'll hate if you're in Sakuno's position but the guy you'll like if you are reading this because he makes the story more interesting XD

Okay.. I'm a liitle confused with their names.. XD

Haha! f4? :))Seems like Horio is a HUGE fan of F4..

Loved this chapter for the f4 moments.. hahaha.. and jhung-jhung WTF? hahaha!

K. peace out!... uhm ... nvm again o.o

ps. Im reviewing while reading... so deal with the unconnected comments XD

Hahaha! First of all... it's so damn hilarious!..The SADIST teacher, how the universe opposes her wish and be seat mates with dudes. And Curse that 'Horio' ruining the moment! haha! btw, i didnt know that 'Ryoma' smiles :O hmmm.. Maybe that's what stole Sakuno's heart? haha lol. Well, it's cheeesy. Although I haven't finished watching the anime Prince of tennis,, I could imagine what's happening in Sakuno's environment.. well that's it. I sense the author's up to an unforgettable short[?] love story. Another BTW, Ryoma so cool when he sang the song.. although it wasnt mentioned what the song is.. hmm I wonder. XD

okay here's my thumbs up!... uhm.. nevermind.

Well that was...annoying cough*Horio*cough. But I love how Sakuno is freaking out! It is so funny! Can't wait for the next chapter!

Hello...Arigato for updating...hmm, i noticed that Ryoma was talkative neh?hehe..I'm still looking forward to the other chapters..Thumbs up for making it..:))

please make the last chapter that ryoma will be a human for sakuno..domo arigato..:))

man,i 3 this story so far!keep it up!