Awwwww so sexy-fied! I was actually hoping that the story would end something like 'Edge what the hell! Are you reading Twilight?' lol funny!

Well, I just found your stories, and I like your pairings so far! Not much to comment on here, cause it's kinda PWP, but I enjoyed it.

Great story!

I just realized I complete forgot to review this. Shame on me :)

Normally I hate relationship sex, because most people on here completely take all the conflict and tension out and make it all fluffy.

I think this is one of your best stories so far. There are so much emotions and conflicts hidden under the surface. Even though Adam is bottoming, he is the one who is in control in this relationship and Mike is fighting that with every fiber of his body. He loves him, he hates him and that is exactly how he wants it.

That is exactly why I like Mike/Adam so much. It can never be fluffy and you can have so much issues between them that it will never get boring.

Please stop being insecure about writing them. It's the most brilliant pairing in the world and you nail it every time.

I’m not really convinced on the Mike/Adam pairing (no fault of yours—I think I just like Mike/Chris too much to stray. And I can’t help but think Adam and Jay belong together) but I do like your style and I think you bring a lot to the characters when you write them.

I like that there seems to be a lot between them that’s just understood (Mike knows when to stop pushing his luck when Adam calls him Michael, the hints of the story behind Mike sneaking out after the first night, etc) I appreciate that you can show a lot of dynamics in their relationship without having to come right out and state it bluntly (a skill I often lack, so I respect it a lot in others)

Just as an FYI- you seem to mix up your words in a few spots. It’s not too noticeable until I got to thrust instead of trust. I knew what you meant, but it made some of the sentences read strangely.

Oh mine...You have zero clue how happy you just made me. I have been so frustrated lately & yearning for someone to write something that would trigger my interest. If I was getting quality, I was not getting proper characterization. If I was getting proper characterization, I was not getting quality. Sans couple of peeps here who themselves have been equally irritated at the lack of proper Edge slash. I am so so delighted to see this, specially from someone who I expect to write something properly.

& I want to thank you greatly for being open-minded, conversing & most importantly an author with traits that rarely feature slashers nowadays. I have a huge amount of respect for authors who show desire to grow & experiment. Who want to test their boundaries & get out of their comfort zone. Most of the authors who have a huge following here & are very much well-known sadly shy away from experimentation with their characters. I have been so annoyed with the lack of creativity & biased behavior of people here. You earned my respect the day you took my opinion as a challenge. Seriously, talking to you lit a hope in my heart that there are still some people around who think with their minds rather than following the stale & over-done trends. I appreciate you doing this so damn much. Specially the fact how you didn't need to do this, but did it to prove to urself as well as give me something in process. I nearly missed this, since the site's search engine is down. But a fellow friend praised this piece earlier so I caught it. They were equally thrilled to see Mike as a top in this equation & I am definitely gonna refer this story as one of my most recommended Edge shot. I am perfectly satisfied with how you have done this. I am very keen on characters, & I absolutely ADORED how you have Adam & Mike respectively in their definitely surpassed million bucks the 'New Yr Revolution' try. This is not only a good effort, but one of my fav Edge pieces ever by someone beside Rhi or Terrah after such a long time.

My absolute favorite part of this was the main theme. Edge's ass. Lol. Its one of my biggest obsession & I am surprised how well you have managed to compliment him in this story. I have been subjected to such horrible writing that I expect people to kill any guy that is not their fav. I have stopped expecting anyone to do Edge justice, beside mentioned two authors above. & since Mike is mostly your main guy, I have discovered that you are in the list of those VERY few authors who can write un-biased writing. Where you are concentrating more on your writing rather than making your main guy a pathetically centric character.

OMG...the image...damn...See? THIS is why I want Adam as a bottom so bad! He's got one of the most natural bottom look, but more so have such a pretty fuckable ass. & I love it when its on display & someone gets to drool on it. I am one of those who strangely likes Miz as Adam's sex partner a little too much. & the way you described the effect on Mike after catching Adam like that...God...it was so perfect.

*Giggles* Mike should be grateful Adam wasn't wearing his famous well-discussed thongs ;P it would have been ever harder to resist..if there is any resist at all lol. But the description & detail of your writing, its already wining me over. I am usually a fan of well-descriptive scenes, where emotions, whether its smut, fluff or angst, are show-cased with authority. Now this is a plain smut piece but I can get into it easily.

& YES! That's the EXACT affect Adam's ass would have on any man with a dick! Oh damn...& Mike is so hungry for him..I love it.

"I love your ass."

*giggles* & I love you for writing Mike being so complimentary ;) I love it when he's dirty. LOL & Adam's a bookworm, but seriously, he didn't get distracted? Such a buzz-kill. He's got a stud drooling over his ass & he's lost in a book. Hehe, Adam likes to play hard to get... ;P OMG smack on the ass! Adam's ass is so spankable & its such a pretty pretty sight! & Mike's obsession with it...God, this is such a perfect plot for me! I LOVE you for writing this like this! Seriously!

LULZ...Adam is being such a bitch! Its lovely. The scenario..it'll only make Mike more determined & he'll be taking what he wants. Adam submission is always a welcoming thought ;)

*DROOLS* All the groping...Mike loving that ass with his hands...wanting Adam so bad...God...you have done a good job in making me hot! & its not often I find myself getting hot when I read slash here.

Damn me...I love how you have written Mike here..he doesn't care what Adam says lol. He try to convince him politely at first. When Adam continues to being a teasy bitch, he says fuck it & expose him. Then the rubbing...dammit its so fucking HOT! The forwardness & 'I am taking what I want' attitude of Mike is getting to me the most. Its the way I usually like to read him. The way I could connect to him. He's arrogant, cocky & persuasive. The way Adam is all complains & basically having no say here...I am loving it!

God..you have such command on your characters. People ruin the characters when they write smut, except few, but you have given so much meaning to both here. They are not just fucking, but we're getting an insight into their relationship.

*Pants*...I am losing control...Its so sexy & dirty...Miz grinding into that gorgeous ass & being so hot..

"So how about I take you as you are now, head buried into the pillows, ass high in the air for me to do whatever I want with it… I could take you dry, just burry myself in that tight ass of yours without warning and make you scream… oh you would be beautiful like this, I know it…"

...That image...is never getting out of my head now..one of the hottest thing I have read..& one of the hottest way someone's has ever talked to Adam during sex...& YES, he would be DAMN beautiful! So fucking pretty!

Mike's desire to take Adam dry make him even hotter here! You have done an AWESOME job on Mike here, as well as displaying the affect of Adam's beauty on him.

'because all in all his lover probably had had dick up his ass more times in his life than he'd had sex – which didn't mean that he was calling Adam a slut, what he never had been and never would be. Not to him at least.'

OMG LULZ! This is perfect description of Edge...Hehe, sorry Mike, I think he's a slut ;P LOVE LOVE LOVE Edge's characterization here as much! You have written him EXACTLY the way I love him & its very surprising lol!

& yes damn..the image of Adam on all fours & him beneath Mike is wondrous & very much drool-worthy!

Oh God..you HAD to make it perfect for me! Mike making Adam beg to get fucked...I love the control they have over each other here. Its so rare to see both bottom & top written so beautifully in a story.

& Damn damn damn..I am running out of space...& it never happens unless its for Rhi or Terrah. Gotta cut it short now...

Mike is SOOOOOOOO damn amazingly HAWT like this! God...spanking Adam...that just adds more to the sexiness here. & they both are so much needy for each other, & it makes the connection here so strong. & yes, Adam was perfectly slutty & pretty here for me. I don't know how you have written him so wonderfully & authentically in this role when you said you didn't see it lol. Its nearly perfect. He's such a temptation here, yet he seem oblivious at how slutty he just really sound or look.

& damn me, YES, this is the power Mike always possess in my mind! I like him to have such command..he's just taking what he desire & keeping such power. *Pants*...Adam's ass still in air...Your killing me with this over-dose of hotness here.

Aww so Adam is a bossy bitch too? Lol...I absolutely love it when bottom half gets some authority too. He's locked Mike around his ass ;) Oh...kisses...beautiful!

LOL...Great Adam...I love the kind of lover he is here. Give Mike his ass & go back to his book...he's so cute. & I don't blame Mike here. His cock got insulted. It probably needed more attention.

PERFECT! PERFECT! PERFECT! & I havent used that word for many Edge stories lately. Adam's ass is worth being obsessive over & the last line summed up Mike/Adam perfectly here. I LOVED this take on their relationship so fucking much!

Hehe such a tease Adam...& Mike spooning that ass...Wow...this is pure hotness. Its wonderful how you didn't use any rimming, fingering, sucking yet managed to write such a detail & effective sex scene. I commend your effort greatly here.

Wonderful work. It was the best thing I have read in a long time by someone that's not Rhi or T. THANK YOU so much! So much for doing this! You surprised me with your brilliance with Edge here, & Mike was as good as I wanted him to be. Characterization & plot here was brilliant. I also became a fan of your writing. I have been bitching alot lately & finally someone gives me something that could shut me up for the time being lol.