Reviews for Soulmates
StarryArtist chapter 13 . 7/18
10/10 would read again. Made my cry in a good way
Dovahcrap chapter 13 . 6/27
I have read a well-written and beautiful story that constantly pulled my heartstrings. In all honesty, I expected to read a light and warm-hearted romance. The first chapter was beautifully-written and from there, I was hooked into reading the rest of the story in one go, which was a good decision in my part. While I was foolishly expecting the romance to grown and bloom from then on, what I ended up reading was a frustratingly beautiful story of how blind love is. Every chapter, I grew more and more frustrated with how the story was going that I didn't stop my tears from falling at how the story slowly broke my heart. In fact, I was ready to stop reading then and there after how Harry was so annoyingly stubborn and blind. If anyone were to see me while I read, they'd think I was crazy. So it just shows how much emotion there is in the story. So much that I finally cried in happiness for them in the end.

You have beautifully-written Luna and amazingly made Harry so infuriatingly stubborn and blind. I would have hoped that each chapter could explore both Harry and Luna's point of view and emotions. While I hoped that that were the case, I still immensely enjoyed the story. The story perfectly paints love in a hauntingly beautiful way. Of how blind it can be and heart-breaking for those around to witness it, more so to those people that realized their love too late. I'm extremely grateful that you've given this beautiful story an equally beautiful end. Thank you.

I could continue telling you how much emotion and tears, both of frustration and happiness, your story brought me but I fear that this might get even longer that I would have wanted. So my dear good author, I thank you from the bottom of heart for giving us this beautiful story. You have made me pour out my emotions and have made my day brighter, which I am immensely grateful for. I hope that you're doing well and I wish you the very best in life. Take care and be safe. Thank you.
HarryPotterLover chapter 13 . 1/31
I like the ending. I feel bad for Harry, he should never feel the pain he did. But he did get his wish.
Guest chapter 13 . 1/14/2018
This is like the fourth time i have read this story and I cry every time. It is super well written and had a butiful tone. Keep up the good work.
Syncopeter chapter 1 . 10/12/2017
Just a nice little story, but then whats wrong with that? Nothing at all, I like them every once in a while I've read a lot of novel length and longer stories lately I now search for novelette type ones and this is one of them. Thanks for writing it and posting it here.
G1375 chapter 13 . 8/18/2017
This story actualy made me cry. It was super well written. Keep up the good work. :)
Lily Ophelia chapter 13 . 11/8/2015
To that last reviewer: Well, I suppose it's a good thing I'm not writing for you, now is it? If I want Luna to be in botany, I'll write it that way. If I want to use a Soulmates trope, I will. It's fan fiction.

Go off and write your own story that has the so-called natural relationship development you believe to be the best, instead of leaving nasty reviews on mine that have nothing to do with anything except it wasn't written the way you liked.
GodricGeoffreyGryffindor chapter 13 . 11/7/2015
Can't say I like this story, even though I like Harry paired with Luna. Soulmates spoil a story. Instead of Harry discovering Luna and letting their love grow naturally, soulmates force all sorts of unnatural acts. In this case, it forces Harry to do the disaster in chapter 3 where Luna is left dripping wet in snow and devastated and abandoned; it also forces Harry to wait until the day before the wedding to break the news to Ginny that there will be no wedding. We don't get to see romance building, so it's a cheap plot device for an author to get the ship he/she wants without having to write realistic love scenes.
GodricGeoffreyGryffindor chapter 7 . 11/7/2015
Luna's specialty isn't botany, it's cryptozoology.
GodricGeoffreyGryffindor chapter 3 . 11/7/2015
Well, that chapter was a complete disaster. Not only does Luna suffer extreme embarrassment in front of the whole school, but then her date takes her out into the snow when she's sopping wet and abandons her. This chapter's almost like porn—no redeeming social value.
Vivss chapter 13 . 7/10/2015
I love this story so much! I've just reread it, and it is as good as the first time I read it.
It is Luna and Harry full of angsty, my fav type of story. I wish you had written more fics of this pairing.
old guy chapter 4 . 7/9/2015
I'm glad Harry can't figure it out. I never could either, beyond just being in the same House they were close. I always thought Hermione or Luna were much better to/for him.
Vivss chapter 2 . 7/10/2015
Is there a link where I can see the picture of Harry and Luna's blue hair?
bloodredcherry chapter 1 . 3/30/2014
I am really excited to read this story. This is a ship that I would like to read more of - even if it's just friendship!
pennilovesstories chapter 13 . 2/17/2014
Uahhh, this was sad. partly. But also really sweet. Bittersweet then :)
I felt so bad for Luna when Harry left her in the snow after kissing her for the first time!
I nearly cried! O.o
And then in the pub when they meet again and Luna just wants to talk and Harry doesn't know his own felings and it just hurts !
And to top it all off, the last scene in the owlery where Luna's hands tremble and she just CAN'T.
And I just COULDN'T. Too many feels.
But it was very beautiful and I still think that Harry and Luna make a way better couple than Harry and Ginny :/ (Is there like an official ship name for harry ad luna?)

Penni :)
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