Im using my phone aha. This is really well written I funnely enough what Aliens 4 last night and was thinking about there chemistry. You have written them very well especially capturing Ripley's more predatory/animalist characteristics/movement. Please write another chapter. This is really good and there isn't enough Ripley/Call fanfiction in the world

Oh, man. I love it! Please write something more with them! They're just so cute together! Ripley- strong, alien and Call is pure, shy. They're so perfect :) Your fanfic is one of the best. Unfortunately there is only a few fanfiction of this fandom :(

This potential pairing in the film was wierd, but I loved it! Of the four Alien films, numbers 2 and 4 were the only ones I really liked. You've definitely stayed true to the spirit of the franchise!

There is nowhere near enough Ripley/Call love out there. I was really happy to stumble across this little gem. Characters were in character, and pretty deep. Well done :D

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this is good. I can't wait to see what happens next.

This is perfectly written and completely in character. Which is a rare thing, let me assure you, in any ship. You captured their voices perfectly, Call was just as self loathing and awkward as she was in the movie and Ripley was spot on. You've got a real knack for writing, very detailed and strongly composed.

Interesting to say the least. I mean, I am not a big fan of the alien series alone, especially the movie Alien Resurection, but it's interesting. There is several parts of the story that you really put in the detail, and that's a plus.

Love the ravenous alien references throughout: ‘ravenous aliens who were busy trying to kill everything in sight’ ‘having aliens trying to bite off their heads every bloody second.’

Descriptive words for them being together…. O.o

"You swing every way." –Just HA.

Innuendos galore! It’s a whole party of them…

MORE innuendos….

Rather sweet, rather funny :)

Approval!