I love this story, I'm sad to see that it hasn't been updated in a long time though. It's always kind of sad to not be able to finish something that has caught my attention in such a great way. Although it is highly unlikely, I request that you finish this story. I would love to read the ending.

So it's been 2 1/2 years now, any plans on picking it back up?

I'm really enjoying this story and hope you further continue it one day. I will point out that towards the end there, Ovelia, addressing Agrias, calls her Ovelia.

Considering neither Ovelia nor Orinus are actually related to the King, it must really ruffle the Queen's feathers that Ovelia is there. Ovelia is a body double because the original fell ill and died. Orinus' actual father is unknown.

I can't help but wonder if Balbanes will meet Zaalbag's canon fate. Will you be including the 13th stone and Worker 8?

You might already know this, but Germanique, the man who killed Ajora before, is implied to be a an ancestor of the Ruglia line- meaning Ramza and Alma were practically born to oppose the Lucavi. Hell, Ramza, in canon, not only killed Altima, Alma managed to expel it from her body after it possessed her.

Will you be including War of the Lions characters like Luso and Balthier, or is it just going to be bas FFT characters? Also, will Cloud be making an appearance? Also, while I don't object to Ovelia being one of the women after Ramza, as a guy who primarily ships Ramza with Agrias, will she be one of his potential suitors?

There are few characters I outright hare in FFT, but Barinten tops the list, even more so than Algus. I'm glad something good came out of Rafa failing to kill Razma.

Since Barinten wasn't apart of the Zodiac Brave conspiracy, I doubt Dycedarg actually had anything to do with Ramza's assassination. Not that he wouldn't do so... What he did to Balbanes, Larg and Zaalbag in canon, not to mention what he allowed to happen to Ramza and Alma... Still, Elmdor using Algus as his blunt instrument tool of assassination isn't surprising.

I take it Olevia is going to be joining Rafa and Milluda (and Teta?) in Ramza's pseudo-harem?

You know, given Delita's subtle meddling with Milluda, I had expected for Alma to try and be setting up Ramza with Teta in pure Ranma 1/2 fashion. But apparantly, she just wanted some blood sport entertainment for the ball. Ironically, it will probablly help for the commoners to see a noble (Even fi he is a bastard) standing up for one of their own against another noble (albiet one from a disgraced family).

Glad to see I wasn't misreading things when I thought Delita was pushing Milluda towards Ramza.

Milluda wouldn't not fight. Ramza was never her enemy, like he was her's. If Ramza and Delita hadn't taken in Algus like they had... Their earlier confrontation with Milluda might not have ended as harshly. Weigraf and Milluda were both tragic figures, Weigraf even more than his sister. Very few people got happy endings in canon. Really, just Ramza, Alma and the people who traveled with them and even then Ramza and those who traveled with him were declared avowed heretics. Olivia, Olan, Zaalbag and many others deserved better than they'd gotten.

Update

Dude update

I sincerely hope I don't have to wait another year for the next chapter of this... And yet, if I do, it will have been a year of patience well-spent. Because this story is fucking awesome, and I want more!

"Just the fact I've stated it may mean another 2-year hiatus for all I know.

-Gaming Ikari"

Don't go proving yourself right now. xD