Reviews for Warriors New Zealand: Createacat 2
ninjaD4NC3R chapter 1 . 8/15/2013
CaC is illegal. Please take this story down now.
-Spire of SOTE
ZeldaOcarinaEpona chapter 9 . 1/15/2013
Ocarinaoftimerocks12:
Aurorapaw, Fieldclan, male, medicine cat apprentice, emerald green eyes, silver tom, black back paws, black ears, unusually long tail, quiet and thoughtful personality, Aurorapaw is a quick learner, although he has only been medicine cat apprentice for one moon he has learned all the herbs. Born into Fieldclan he had always wanted to be medicine cat, he would sit from morning to evening as a kit in the medicine den watching Goldenblossom. Mother: Dewstrike, father: Albratossky (please consider for main)
ZeldaOcarinaEpona chapter 8 . 1/15/2013
Ocarinaoftimerocks12:
Former name: Twilight, Clan name: Duskpelt, Clan: Guestclan, female, warrior, ice blue eyes, silver-blue fur with white paws and a white tip on her tail, very thick pelt because she lived where there wasn't much warmth, stubborn and adventurous, very bold and outgoing, she was born as a loner, when the clans started becoming organized, she stumbled upon Guestclan. They invited her to join, but at first she refused. Sometime later she came upon the clan again, they remembered her and invited her to join again. When she saw how well Guestclan was coming along she agreed. She has learned the ways of the clan. Family: Midnight(father, dead), Leaf (mother, dead) Dawn (sister, now Dawntail of fieldclan), Mars (brother, dead) (please consider for main)
Former name: Dawn, Clan name: Dawntail, Clan: Fieldclan, female, warrior, amber fur with dark brown stripes, hazel eyes, like Duskpelt, she has a very thick pelt because she was born in a place of little warmth, calm and respectful, shyer than Duskpelt, but not extremely shy, considerate of others, after their parents and brother died Duskpelt and Dawntail went their sperate ways, Dawntail met Fieldstar almost instantly after she and Duskpelt went their ways, she accepted Field star's offer to join Fieldclan right away, family: Midnight (father, dead), Leaf (mother, dead), Twilight (now Duskpelt of Guestclan), Mars (brother, dead) (please consider for main)
Moon Skybirne chapter 13 . 5/9/2011
Hey I used to be Rabbitygoodness but now I'm Moon Skybirne. YAY CAN'T WAIT! I know your story will be awesome!
TamTam418 chapter 13 . 5/7/2011
yay! finally its complete!
Scarheart of DarkClan chapter 13 . 5/6/2011
I would like to point something out to you before you put up the alliances in your story. You have Risingsun of FieldClan's mate as Deadpine, but it is Fieldstar. Just wanted to make you aware. Can't wait to read the story.
Lilyflame chapter 13 . 5/6/2011
Yay, I'm glad you finished! :D I kept meaning to give you more cats, but I could never find the time to make them... :(
Kitkat21 chapter 12 . 5/6/2011
Former name and position e.g loner: Diamond

Name: Diamondsky

Clan:Marshclan

Gender: Female

Lives: (leaders only)

Rank: (Leader, warrior etc) Queen

Description: (eye, fur colour etc, any special attributes like scars or long fur) Beautiful young white she-cat with light tabby silver patches and misty green eyes; she has a beatiful frame and a soft coat Kits: Featherkit (silver tabby she-kit with white paws and blue eyes) Wingkit (white she-kit with black patches and green eyes) Copperkit (muscular white tom with light ginger patches and a copper-colored tail and dark amber eyes) and Cloudkit (white tom with light gray patches and amber eyes)

Personality: smart and logical, kind and good-hearted, would never want to see harm come to another cat unless they've done her a major wrong. She would do anything for her kits and is humble. She has great hunting skills and is a cat many toms wish to be with, but she would only become mates with one if they could prove to her that they could care for her and her kits, and are kind-hearted, like herself.

History: (this is quite important in this story if you want your cat to be a main) Doesnt remember her littermates or parents, she was given to another owner at a young age, and lived as a kittypet for a short time before taking off into the woods, where she met Venom, a young tom, they fell in love and lived together. When the clans formed, Diamond found herself pregnant and ddecided it was in her best interest to join. Venom didnt want kits so he told her to go on her own. She left without a glance back, realizing how selfish he had become. But when she had her kits, she promised herself they would be good, sweethearted kits who were selfless and caring. She is best friends with Willowsong and findds her kits a delight.

Other: (Family, if you are going for a main position etc) Main please! The kit's warrior names will be: Featherlight, Wingpelt, Coppertail and Cloudfang... Thanks :D
Mousepool221 chapter 12 . 5/6/2011
Oh can you do me a favor and move Hollowtail to Marshclan plz? Thanks
Mousepool221 chapter 12 . 5/5/2011
Name: Mousepool

Clan:Gustclan

Gender:Female

Lives: (leaders only)

Rank: (Leader, warrior etc)queen

Description: (eye, fur colour etc, any special attributes like scars or long fur) Short-furred dark brown tortie she-cat with deep blue eyes, one white paw and a spot around her left eye ; Has Hollowtail's kits Hailkit/storm(dark gray tom with stormy green eyes), Wailingkit/breeze(tan, brown and white tortie she-cat with one blue eye and one green) and Thornkit/heart (sleek dark brown tom with big yellow eyes)

Personality:calm and sweet, very very protective, skitish, paranoid, worrisome, loving and caring

History: (this is quite important in this story if you want your cat to be a main) Was born to Nightowl and Screechtail, her only sibling was her sister, Snowfall, and she became an apprentice under Foxpelt, her sister became an apprentice under Forestlight and they were very close. Then, there was a battle and Snowfall, and Nightowl were killed, this made Screechtail a very mean and pecimistic cat and it seemed like he had forgotten about his daughter completly. Mousepool became lonely and then she met a warrior from Fernclan and fell head over tail for him. She became pregnant with his kits and he wanted to stay with her. But she told him "no..i cant, you have worked so hard to earn the respect from your clanmates, i'll raise them, but trust me, they'll know who their ffather is..." and so she vowed to raise her kits. She never told anyone who the father was and just let them assume whoever they pleased. She became best friends with the queen Lynxpath and she is the only one who knows the father of the kits is. She trust lynxpath to keep her secret. Her father left not to long ago by deciding he didnt want to live in that life anymore without Nightowl, he wanted a new beginning so he disappeared.

Other: (Family, if you are going for a main position etc)

Mother: Nightowl(deceased)

Father: Screechtail(status unknown)

Sister: Snowfall (deceased)

Mate: Hollowtail (alive, currently living in Fernclan)

Kits: Wailingkit, Thornkit, and Hailkit

Main please?:D

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Name:Hollowtail

Clan:Fernclan

Gender:male

Lives: (leaders only)

Rank: (Leader, warrior etc)warrior

Description: (eye, fur colour etc, any special attributes like scars or long fur) short-furred Dark gray tom with one amber eye and one blue, has one white paw

Personality: proud and kind, good and noble, is a hero in his own mind and can't stand injustice, loves Mousepool for herself and would do anything for her

History: (this is quite important in this story if you want your cat to be a main) Born to two Rogues named Skitty and Jet, had no siblings, joined the clans

Other: (Family, if you are going for a main position etc) wishes to leave his clan to be with mousepool but she doesnt want him to. Still wants to and is considering doing it anyways
Blitz-it chapter 12 . 5/5/2011
Loner name: Shade

Name: Shadebreeze

Clan: Fernclan

Gender: She cat

Lives: none lol

Rank: Warrior

Description: Dark grey, black spots and shiny, sleek, light fur and turquoise eyes.

Personality: Emotional, always wants to defend kits and elders and is a greatly resepcted clan cat, she is very graceful but a swift killer.

History: Shade(breeze) loved to roam the thick bush of New Zealand for her life until she found her long lost sister, Fernstar and her other sister Moonshine, did not remember her at all, since and old loner name Xena told her about her past while passing through her bush. Lonely and curious, Shade(breeze) seeked out her long lost sisters and told them who they were. Shade(breeze) was longing for a new home as she was too far from the native bush she lived in and was invited to join Fernclan and now loves to defend her home and live happy life with her sisters.

(*NOTE* ONLY IF THIS IS OK WITH TAMTAM418 FIRST, OTHERWISE JUST MAKE HER A WARRIOR Of FERNCLAN. If that does not work just cut out all the sisters stuff and make her travel to discover fernclan over mountians and stuff xD) Her mate is Robinheart, who i will add description in a sec. And she loves her family more than anything else in the world.

Other: I am going for MAIN position, and in history you know of her family. She will have one kit named Starkit who is a silver she cat with black starlike spots with Robinheart.

Please please please make her a main because i put alot of thought into her D i am also from New Zealand so that would be amazing!

Loner name: Robin

Name: Robinheart

Clan: Fernclan

Gender: Tom

Lives: (leaders only)

Rank: Warrior

Description: Reddish brown tortoiseshell with silver eyes and a scared side.

Personality: Light hearted and funny, caring and modest.

History: he liked to live in the trees around where the clans now are.

Other: has a mate (Shadebreeze) and loves her so much and has a kit called Starkit and such. If you need any cats to die he could die in a fight protecting Shadebreeze near the end of the story. I don't really want him t be a main so yeah thanks!

I can't wait for this story and I hope my cats get in because i spent around half an hour typing this, and im actually supposed to be doing homework! Thanks alot,

Oakii *subscribes* *favs*
The Liar Of Truth chapter 12 . 5/4/2011
Former name: Delta

Name: Weststrike

Clan: Gorseclan

Gender: Male

Rank: Elder

Description: A huge tom with short brown fur and green eyes.

Personality: Gruff and bad tempered when it comes to other rouges, believe everything can be solved through fighting, quite possessive and protective of his family. Is a little awkward when it comes to kits or apprentices, though he appreciates meaningful talks with others

History: Lived on the streets his whole life and has the scars and attitude to prove it. Chose to join the clan with his daughter when she decided to, and would rather settle down since he's getting quite old.

Others: His mate, Chrome, is dead while his son Barncroft and daughter Sonar chose to live as rouges. Only having his youngest, Blackmoor (renamed Leaftail), left, he decided to join the clan with her.
Sempiternal Decalescence chapter 12 . 5/4/2011
Rogue Name: Sun's Fire

Clan Name: Blazestorm

Clan: FernClan

Rank: Warrior

Appearance: Golden tabby tom with jagged ginger streaks and dark amber eyes

Personality: Blazestorm is a fierce cat. He will never back down from a fight and is loyal to his group/Clan/whatever. He is one of the strongest cats in New Zealand and is not afraid to kill if necessary.
Scarheart of DarkClan chapter 12 . 5/4/2011
Name: Sunny

Name: Sunheart

Clan: FernClan

Gender: she-cat

Rank: Warrior

Appearance: Light golden she-cat with ginger spots and deep amber eyes.

Personality and History: Is very noticiable and will always draw attention to herself. Grew bored with life as a loner and longed to spend her days with other cats. When the Clans were beginning to form, she jumped right on board. Has no ambition, but wants to be loved. Can get fiesty when she is ignored, or her ideas are forgotten about. Isn't popular with other Clans because all she can talk about is herself. Loves to hear the sound of her own voice and will always boss her apprentice around (please give her an apprentice.) Looks back on her life as a loner and scorns it. Quickly hates loners, rogues, and kittypets and thinks they are stupid for not joining the Clans.

Mate: Ragingfire

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I was wondering if you could consider an older of my cats (Marbleleaf:elder:FieldClan)to be the main elder. I just though how cool it would be to have an evil elder.
HANDYHELPER chapter 11 . 5/4/2011
Name: Gentleshadow

Clan: Gorseclan

Gender: Female

Lives: (leaders only)

Rank: (Leader, warrior etc) queen

Description: (eye, fur colour etc, any special attributes like scars or long fur) longfurred, sleek golden tabby she-cat with ocean-blue eyes, cream colored paws and tail tip (very pregnant with Hawkshadow's kits(they will be named: Spottenkit/stone: a calico she-cat with one green eye and one blue eye and Fallenkit/leaves: ginger tom with white underbelly and green eyes)

Personality: sweet and quiet, is very defensive about her kits and would do anything for them, loves Hawkshadow with all her heart and Hollylight is a dear friend

History: (this is quite important in this story if you want your cat to be a main) born to Rainsplash and a rogue tom named Sneaker, met Hawkshadow and became his mate, had her first litter (starpool and Tangledheart ) and is now expecting her second litter of kits

Other: (Family, if you are going for a main position etc) none

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Name: Hawkshadow

Clan: Gorseclan

Gender: male

Lives: (leaders only)

Rank: (Leader, warrior etc) warrior

Description: (eye, fur colour etc, any special attributes like scars or long fur) short-furred black tom with bright yellow eyes, has a long scar across his left eye

Personality:sharp tongued and strict, defensive and agressive, the only cat to never been on the receiving end of his knife-like tongue is Gentleshadow

History: (this is quite important in this story if you want your cat to be a main) born to Waveheart and Lightningtail, met gentleshadow, had kits

Other: (Family, if you are going for a main position etc) Mother: waveheart

father: lightningtail

mate: gentleshadow

sister: Hollylight

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Name:Hollylight

Clan: Gorseclan

Gender: Female

Lives: (leaders only)

Rank: (Leader, warrior etc) warrior

Description: (eye, fur colour etc, any special attributes like scars or long fur) short-furred black she-cat with bright green eyes and one white paw

Personality: witty and sarcastic, hates cats who beleive that they are better than anyone else, extremly defensive, onery, rude

History: (this is quite important in this story if you want your cat to be a main) Has lived in the clans her entire life and the only real friend she's ever had is Gentleshadow, in fact, she is how they met and now feels like she's been abandoned because of it ,and resents their relationship, alrhough she doesnt show it

Other: (Family, if you are going for a main position etc)Main pleeeze:D

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Name:Starpaw

Clan:gorseclan

Gender:female

Lives: (leaders only)

Rank: (Leader, warrior etc) apprentice

Description: (eye, fur colour etc, any special attributes like scars or long fur) short-furred white she-cat with dark brown flecks all over her, has bright, neon green eyes

Personality: funny and a prankster, doesnt respect authority, and is arrogant and bossy, but she's outgoing and everyone cant help but to love her (accept her mentor of course)

History: (this is quite important in this story if you want your cat to be a main)has had a fairly peaceful like, well actaully she has gotten into a lot of trouble for a long time and due to a big problem as a kit, her apprentice ceremony got delayed as punishment, she now resents her brother because he became an apprentice at the right time

Other: (Family, if you are going for a main position etc) Main? Pleease?

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Name:Tangledheart (became a warrior early before Starpaw because he became an apprentice before her)

Clan:Gorseclan

Gender: Male

Lives: (leaders only)

Rank: (Leader, warrior etc) Warrior

Description: (eye, fur colour etc, any special attributes like scars or long fur) short-furred dark brown tabby tom with white paws and blaze, dark amber eyes

Personality: soft-spoken and quiet, respects authority and hopes to one day become leader, wishes his sister could learn to behave herself and finds her a nusiance, he tries to not get involved with her

History: (this is quite important in this story if you want your cat to be a main) he always managed to get out of his sister's schemes and therefore never got into trouble with the clan.

Other: (Family, if you are going for a main position etc) he has a major crush on Rainpaw, and hopes to one day make a move but he isnt very confident in himself

Okay thats all! Hope it helps!
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