Natsu and Gray are so cute and adorable together! I love uke Gray! I loved this story so much!

This story was so cute!
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It was so cute and awesome and I love it so much! They bare so cute together and I thought that I will not say anything like this because I thought those two would not look cute together but they do and it is just so cute! Love it! :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-)

That was good! Don't delete it!

*fangirl squeal* cute! Awesome job Nya!

Ah, reading about hound people in love makes me feel like a perv... Oh well.

good enough for me

Waaaa..so sweet (ʃƪ)

Love ur fanfics..

Ganbatte nee...(ง'̀'́)ง to make a good fanfics.

I love seme natsu n uke gray...*kyaaaa...

cuuuuuuuuuuute. but isnt mirajane around their age? :)

please continue!

i loved it a lot :)

Hahah I loved how you portrayed Gray as the Uke and the shy, vulnerable one xD! 3 Its a ncie story but the back part when Natsu was talking to Mirajane about thanking her for her support and telling her he was the seme was abit out of character :X Hahah other than that it was hot and sweet ;) Nice writing !

That was so cute I loved it.

You should definetly write the sequel (or a second chapter) where they get home and Natsu puts his lollipop licking skills to good use on Gray after practicing on that candy.

PLEASE.

PLEASE.

Fabuolous job

well i know there isn't any sense in reviewing a story so old but still i wanted to do so, so here i am!

oh i love this story. gray is so cute and natsu won't leave a chance to make him blush!