what you lack in character and storie inconsistencies ie charlie john scott bryoles fringe division. you make up in such fantastic writing and plot seriously usually by now id be like great plot porr execution (with all of these missing factors) but you need to pat your self on the back for succefussly overcoming this and making the beginnings of not only and epic Fringe story but an epic Peter and Olivia love story.
please update soon.
love DarkAngelmi818

MORE MORE MORE MORE MOREMORE MORE MORE MORE MOREMORE MORE MORE MORE MOREMORE MORE MORE MORE MOREMORE MORE MORE MORE MOREMORE MORE MORE MORE MOREMORE MORE MORE MORE MOREMORE MORE MORE MORE MOREMORE MORE MORE MORE MOREMORE MORE MORE MORE MOREMORE MORE MORE MORE MOREMORE MORE MORE MORE MOREMORE MORE MORE MORE MOREMORE MORE MORE MORE MOREMORE MORE MORE MORE MOREMORE MORE MORE MORE MOREMORE MORE MORE MORE MOREMORE MORE MORE MORE MORE PLEASE UPDATE SOON

Oh no! a war! I'm scared!

I hope Peter stays in this side with Olivia, he's so in love with her *sighs*

rolfmao buckets!

Oh no! I'm sure Walternate got his hands on Peter's equipment. Now the universe is at risk :(

This is very good! I love it so far! Keep up the great work :)

okay just for those of us who are cringing at bad possibilities...Walter gave Peter immunizations so that he doesn't get anything from our universe and die right? also...I'm betting the reason Olivia never caught anything over there is either a) because of her cortexiphan or b) because she was actually a bit of an astral projection and her real body remained in our universe.

btw, where's Charlie in all of this? not to mention...what are they gonna do about giving Peter an ID...and not getting him captured by either the FBI, the government, or Massive Dynamic?

also...in this story is it Olivia's dad or step-dad who was the abusive alcoholic? also did she kill him in this universe or is he just off of the radar or does he give her a bday card each year?

Great job i'm glad you decided to continue with the story .looking forward for the new chapter

I'm so glad to see you're continuing this story. I remember starting to read it a long time ago, and how disappointed I was when it didn't seem to go anywhere. You've picked a great premise for your fic, taking the 'what if' all the way back to the beginning of the Peter story. And I really like what you've done with it.

Two more chapters waiting for me, and I can't wait to read them.

Great fic, please update soon!

THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU FOR UPDATING THIS FIC!

I LOVE YOU

I really like this story so far :) thank you Josh at wondercon. But seriously, great job!

Ooh, I'm so glad you decided to keep going with this story and add a new chapter! Loved this update, post a new one soon!

i was so happy when you updated i love these alternate choices things, but how is broyels going ton react an when are peter an olivia going to wink* nudge ;)i hope you next chapter has more peter an olivia an im gonna be excited to see this peters character development from bubble boy to charming sardonic hot headed con man we all love

finish it keep it going you can doo so much with this story youll have alot of chapters with peter accumilating to this world olivia falling for him with him becoming a part of fringe team...omg how is broyels going to react he is gonna bed pissed

Please go on! Don't stop there, please, please!