| Reviews for Just keep your hopes in the blindside |
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   Mittenzs chapter 1 . 12/27/2011 The last line was stunning. |
| Gitana del Sol chapter 1 . 7/22/2011 wonderful. just wonderful. took my breath away. i love the ending lines and wish you had not put them in paranthesis because they are powerful. "You might be a queen, but you're no fucking warrior": the swearing in here is the only leak of anger and strength and i really liked it. and it's sort of sad because Bellatrix was always supposed to be the warrior, wasn't she? |
| Thanatos Angelos Girl chapter 1 . 5/15/2011 Very poetic and it shows Narcissa in a weaker light and it shows how she needs her husband and son. Beautifully writen it's a great job! *adds to favorites* Fantastic! |
| xabandonedaccountx chapter 1 . 4/8/2011 Very dark and poetic. I'm seeing Narcissa in a new light |
| pillar-of-salt chapter 1 . 3/7/2011 You have a wonderful sense of prose :) |
| Nerd chapter 1 . 3/5/2011 I enjoyed your one-shot until I got to the last line; "You may be a queen, but you're no fucking warrior." The cuss word is, in my opinion, very unnecessary, and distracts from the mood of your story. I suggest taking out the swear word, because really, it's so distracting. |
| Victory87 chapter 1 . 3/3/2011 Good :O |
| Expecting Rain chapter 1 . 3/1/2011 Very poetic, I like the second person here. |
| Trades of Trickery chapter 1 . 3/1/2011 Love it XD Love the last line "You might be a queen but your no fucking warrior." Loving it Keep writing :) |
| AngelofDarkness1605 chapter 1 . 3/1/2011 Love it, as always D Nice to see a drabble devoted to Narcissa. I begin to appreciate her more and more :) |
