Sequel please I love it

I really liked your story. I was desperately searching for Dark Damon story and your story was just the thing I needed. Great storyline, koved the entire idea of Damon growing from a selfish monster to a man who loved with all his heart. But I would have liked Katherine to have a longer appearance in the story. Great work.

You know I never review an already complete fic; I only do it if it really really really impressed me. This one did, but pretty negatively. Firstly the characters: she isn't too bad, but he is completely OOC. Too OOC; Damon would never lay a hand on Elena, never and overall he wouldn't compel her just so she could be with him forever or rape her. Secondly the way they act: he is a plain rapist and violent man, you made him absolutely terrible and she is like one of the victims of abusive boyfriends that come back everytime even if he beat her or sucked her dry. One that mistakes a rarity of good behaviour such as an apology or good sex for love. I know, she can't actually do nothing about it because he does what he wants and when he prefers and she has no say nor a way to escape. Their relationship is toxic, it's not love that he feels. He's obsessed with her and he is abusive. He beats her and almost kills her and then he frantically apologies and says that he loves her, he didn't want to hurt her. It's horrible. I really can't explain how she fell in love with him... he repeatedly abuses her and even if he makes her forget he does it again and she is conscious and able to understand that he is a bad person.
I had read other works you wrote and I liked them, but not this. I'm disappointed.
I don't like giving bad reviews and thus I'm sorry, even if you'll never read this.
Hope you have a good day

Can't stand this as the ending - there has to be a sequel with Damon & Elena together.
She could be pregnant - her illness on the island due to pregnancy - some special event where there's true love, a vampire can impregnate a human. Damon then goes back to Elena when he finds out. They get married & have a honeymoon back on Bora Bora. Elena then has him turn her so they can live together forever.

Is Elena sick in this, how can she smiles when he kill people in from of her, that its just tooo bad.

one of the best fics I've ever read I pray to the holy lord there's a sequel bc so emo and amazing I can't even BIWISZM loved it loved it loved it so much

You have got to make a sequel!

write a sequel please I love the ending but at the same time I really DON'T want this story to end.

This isn't love, or even lust. It's torture and sadism.

OK, here's the thing. This story makes no sense so far. So I'm not going to continue it. I mean, he kidnaps her, rapes her and the moment he smiles in her direction she goes all mushy and realised that maybe he's just not that bad. And she's conveniently forgotten about her family in all of this which is so OOC it makes me sick. And the moment she sees the news she suddenly cares and 'upsets' Damon only to have him kill an entire diner and go home and ravage her again. Which she likes. I'm sorry, but it just doesn't make sense to me.

Uhg. This ending sucks.

Uhm lame ending

This is genuinely one of the best stories I have every read, you are truly an amazing writer. I just finished reading this story today, and I have so many feels write now it's unreal. I realize it's been a while since you wrote this story, but I would deeply appreciate it if you would continue this story. Though if you don't, I respect your decision to leave it as it is.

I love your writing, please make a sequel Delena need to end together they are in love and the story is soo good... Please Elena needs to rember and go for him. Or he can go after her a firs and dont tell her how he is and then wen she is with Damon she rembers or something

Please a sequel Delena have to be together... I love your writhing please a sequel