I just found this story and LOVE it! Please update it right now! I love jake and nessie and need u to finish this story so they can love each other and find the Cullen's and the pack! :))))

Please please update x

This story is beutiful made me cry aswell please finish it I now your a mother but please try an finish it x

This is really good story... please update soon... :)

I hope it all works out?

I feel so bad for Jacob...

Why are they going back now?

I love this story...

They are slowly working it out huh?

Assess...so sweet..

I love it..

Loved it loved it! Awesome chapter. Just wish Jake will love her back the way she loves him though :( but I have a feeling he will soon:) please update soon!

Heeeeyyyyy Lady!

How are you? How's your lil one?

I love that you updated! So Ness is a brute! I LOVE it. I'm so excited that they are gonna try to bring some of their family back. Can't wait to see where you take this.

Update when you can. We'll be here waiting for you. Hope all is well!

XOXO

nise

Thank you for posting. I like that Nessie has a defensive gift. Hopefully, she will learn how to master it so they can save their family. I can't wait to find out who or what that was in australia. I wonder if it followed them to la push to report back to aro that all of the wolf pack wasn't killed and taken after the battle.

Introducing new tribes and shapeshifters is going to be interesting. I wonder what new cultures and histories you will add. By the way Kim is in love with Jared not Embry. I hope Nessie knows how much jacob loves her she just needs to wait for his feelings to change from protector to lover.

It would be incredible if they got the wolves back and leah's mate turns out to be a shapeshifter from one of the new tribes you introduce. Can't wait until your next chapter.

This story is so beautiful. Jacob and Nessie's feelings are so intense. Your story is wonderfully written. I wish you had finished it.