An interesting spin on Karofsky playing "what if" in his own mind ~ like maybe *he* could have had at least part of what Kurt has (minus the harassment, of course) if he hadn't been so afraid.

LOVING THIS!

Update if you're still continuing this story whichever I hope to all things powerful that you are. Pretty please! I can't wait to see how everythimg plays out. I love your writing, by the way :D Very, very good!

Wow, I was feeling really sorry for Blaine there O_O This is awesome. Really well written, funny at times, and... I just love how it's going. Looks like it hasn't been updated in a while, but I'd love to read more!

~K

I just read all five chapters before realizing this hasn't been updated since March! Please continue...I hate it when I start reading a story and then it is never completed.

I like it! Completely baffled, idiot Blaine is adorable. And clearly confused. I love him. I love that he's never been kissed. Can't wait to read more!

Kate

This fic is awesome. I would totally not be opposed to you writing an AU of the rest of the season! Can't wait for the next chapter! :D

This was amazing! I don't usually read multi chapter stories due to a lack of time, but I'm glad I read this one! Please, please write more.

Yuki-chan~

so lovely, probably my favourite klaine fic :)

what happened with Quinn and Sylvester?

I think you mean, 'our guidance counsellor who has OCD'. otherwise, it sounds like she councils students with OCD only.

'it had been pretty much been a...' though i'm sure that's just a typo.

'mom' doesn't need to be capitalised.

the 'Blaine smacks his lips' sentence should be moved down to the next line.

the Florence Nightingale sentence's a bit unclear.

it's spelt 'Brittany'.

maybe Blaine doesn't what? I'm confused.

'dads' doesn't need to be capitalised.

the sentence describing the rose is also unclear.

'halfway' 's one word.

'weirded' is the correct spelling.

I don't understand the last part as it's unclear.

New Directions doesn't need an apostrophe. and you mean 'their', as in belonging to, not there, as in. a place.

I loved it I cant wait for the next chapter

I'm loving this story so far. Would be thrilled if you did go ahead and continue it past the BIOTA arc :)

I think that all of your characterizations are spot on, especially from the Karofsky chapters I like that he isn't just a remorseless psycho, but at the same time doesn't suddenly become the good guy. He's just a scared kid doing the best he knows how to do and it's nice to see someone write him realistically.

I'll be looking out for the next chapter with much excitement. Take care xx

I like that blaine came back and they talked.

Poor Blaine..no friends but Kurt. New Directions will fix that.

I was reading the last chapter again to remember what had happened.

I really like that the boys have become excepting and comfortable enough that they could have that talk about Kurt, him liking Blaine, and the kiss..and not be freaked out.