I was hesitant to journey down the dark road of a broken Quinn selling herself, but so glad I went. The way you seamlessly manipulate words and raw emotion into vivid and visceral imagery is simply beautiful. Thank you for sharing your talents with us.

Very powerful story. It was my privilege to read.

I had so many thoughts running through my mind while reading this; like how can you possibly be able to write something like this? How are you able to stomach it? But then I thought to myself, probably the same way I'm able to read it to the end. And its not like I've never heard of the things happening in this story. This is pretty much real life for some… but gawd, its painful to have to acknowledge it. My insides were literally aching. And my eyes burn and cheeks wet. (You realize how amazing of a writer you are, right? I hope so. You are brilliant.)

This chapter made me smile and just gives me hope. Rachel's first time with Quinn was very sweet and sort of hilarious as she slowly explore Quinn's anatomy. She's so brave. All the things she went through for the person she loves; we need more Rachel in this world.

Anyway, thank you for this great read:)

I cannot express to you how amazing this was to read. It blew my mind. This story is so good, so raw, so deep, it was gripping in its sincerety. Thank you for this truly eye opening evening.

Found this to be such an interesting concept that was only overshadowed by your unique choice of storytelling. There was a real feeling of despair and being frantic that seemed to parallel Quinn's way of life and Rachel's transformation as she attempted to save Quinn. Loved the inclusion of Brittany and Santana and how they immediately pushed the BS away to be there for Quinn however they could. Nice job!

So good

God damn you! Don't make me cry...this is just so beautifully devastating. Part of my (dark) head cannon is that something like this is how Quinn spent the summer between junior and senior year...but that's my own twisted fantasy...

POOR QUINN :(

interesting

Efffff you and this cursed story. Thank you for ruining my life. That was me voicing my approval. I really must commend your use of literary devices. The metaphors and personification were well executed and I was determined to remain uninvested but I have a soft spot for alliteration and ''apologetically aloof'' made me say, "ugh, I like this author."
I got most of your poetic and myth based references save for the poem about waiting for your lover under the moon, because I am clearly an unread little shit.

I write but I gravitate towards crude humour and sadistic violence. I don't mind writing angst or dose-of-not-so-sunshiney-reality like this, but I tend to feel rather melodramatic.

I have no major qualms about the plot; I cannot tell you how to manipulate your own idea. I'm really impressed with the language used! I've never left a review before but I must say; well done!

This is great. I love and I'm completely hooked.

love love love this!

You write beautifully and I'm glad to have come across this story.
I hope that you continue to write more Rachel & Quinn!

Do you have any other work one can read outside of fanfic ?

Keep writing!

okay wow this fic is just incredible.
i need many, many moments.
ughhhhhh
the plot was just so great and i loved your rachel and your quinn was so believable and heartbreakingly realistic and santana and brittany too just everything 3
plus you should get the ultimate award for best first time sex scene ever because DAMN was that realistic and imperfectly perfect 333333333333333

You don't think you write-well? Are you crazy? This was an amazingly tragic, dark fair-tale-with-dare i say-a happy ending or new beginning. You are a beautiful writer with a gift for words. Continue on.