OMG it's the best Edward dark that I've already read it. Please UPDATE !

This is a good story, really meaty (pun intended). I think Leah was going to tell Jake that she is pregnant. Edward needs to pull his head out of his ass, and tell Bella the deets about Vampire Mates. It would be in EVERYONE'S best interests if Edward gathered all of Mike Newton's parts,and made sure they are found. Sorry you didn't finish this, but I understand health trumps all else. Hope you feel better soon.

How in the heck will Edward explain away the damage to his new kitchen?

Please finish the story. Its awesome. Don't leave us hanging.

OOOOKAY so I just binged this entire story in one day and can i just say...
you have such a talent for writing smut lol. writing in general, too, but the smut really stands out here. usually, a story has a good plot and awful sex scenes or good sex scenes and awful plot. but with this story here you've graced us with good sex and good plot.
I will admit that I'm not usually a fan of dark edward but well, you know, hes so freaking sexy and dude just really does love bella. of course, he does still piss me off sometimes with how demanding and controlling he is but hey, that's dark edward for ya lol.
sorry this review isn't well- written. I'm using the app on my phone and like I said, i just binged this entire story in one day.
I hope you haven't abandoned this story as it is truly masterfully written, and that you will grace us with an update soon!
thanks so much for sharing

I’m all caught up on this story and it’s SOOO GOOD! I really hope you continue. I love the use of your words and phrasing and the chemistry between E&B is off the charts. Looking forward to more. and thank you!

Allie from Minnesota

I love this story so much

Hi. It’s me again, Kelly, if you have any free time it would be lovely if you could add another 20 chapters to this story. Because it’s freaking wonderful.

Ive enjoyed this story! Definitely on my list of ‘well written stories’! Hope you find inspiration to complete this!

Ive definitely enjoyed reading this story! I’m saving it on my list of well written stories - despite it being ‘not complete’ - if you find it I’m you to complete this, I’ll still be a reader!

YOU NEED TO UPDATE THIS!

please

Hello. I really hope you get this going again. Thanks for sharing this part of you with us. Please everyone stay safe.

Aaaannd...just checking in - just in case you have time to update. You know, maybe you want to escape the craziness of isolation and delve into a different world? This would be perfect escapism for you. Ahem... :-)

Any chance of you picking up this story again?

Please update soon - this is interesting