| Reviews for Mere Dreamer |
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   CatLover444 chapter 1 . 6/13/2014 Very Sweet!1122! |
| justme chapter 1 . 11/28/2013 C': i loved it! So beautiful the shipping that might come on tv wonderful! |
| I just wanna die honestly chapter 1 . 5/7/2013 for a first fanfic this is fucking awesome |
| Pyke Mern chapter 1 . 6/2/2012 I did not think it was cheesy. I have read a LOT of pearlshipps and this one is one of the best. Most of them are stupid so this was great! |
| VineCore chapter 1 . 8/22/2011 AWESOME One Shot. I like the way you describe things. It puts a more umphh in the story. |
| XashXdawnX chapter 1 . 6/29/2011 Nice story! Great explaining of every little detail! Faves!:) |
| PorcelainDollxx chapter 1 . 6/28/2011 THIS IS THE CUTEST STORY EVER! *.* I absolutely loved it. I also love the way you described the scenes, you are a really great writer. |
| wow chapter 1 . 6/15/2011 that was the most descriptive and best story i have ever read...and i have read 43465496 stories |
| wildchild222 chapter 1 . 5/17/2011 Absolutely beautiful. And don't worry, one-shots are supposed to be cheesy and full of fluff. Great job on your first fan fic. |
| Blaaaziken chapter 1 . 4/19/2011 Wow... That's some amazing descriptions you have. You have a great choice of words and you describe everything so perfectly. Great use of metaphors and similes also. I haven't seen a more descriptive fanfic ever. When it comes to the actual story, yeah it is a little cliche, but I still think its cute. Great work for your first fanfic. I hope you write plenty more like this. |
| Ayayacchi chapter 1 . 4/18/2011 It's better than most people's first time. Good job :] |
| CuttieGirll57 chapter 1 . 3/14/2011 Aww, this was ADORABLE! I loved it! |
| InfernaLux chapter 1 . 2/28/2011 I love it; and even better that it's your first story. Try to be confident. If you're like that when you post stories, your self-esteem will go up, prompting you to make more stories. And I want you to make more stories. But one thing I'd like to mention, though. I've noticed some of your sentences are run-on sentences. What that means is that it's a sentence that keeps on going when it should've ended. Some of the comas in the sentences should be periods. You might want someone to read your story over; that person could notice mistakes that you have missed. Nonetheless, it was a wonderful story. And yes, it was a bit cheesy and cliche, but to be honest, it was a good story. There aren't that many Pearlshippers. And to see a new one, it just makes my day. Anyway, keep up the good work. No need to worry, and everything will be fine. Sincerely, ~Lux |
