Awww windows, kinky. Friendly banter. I like it.

I loved it a lot

Haha, amazing xD great one-shot

poor cleaner dude LOL !

this was so good! i could totally imagine both of them as students, law with his confidence and kidd with his...mechanic-ness, lol! the ending was unexpectedly funny XD and god, so sexy...3

Nice lemon.

YOU WERE IN A LECTURE, LOOKED OUT THE WINDOW AND THOUGHT OF 'THAT'? *dies of laughter

I bet that lecture turned reeeeeeeeaaally awkward for you, wasn't it? XDDD

Anyway. On a more serious-ish note... I stopped reading this fic a liiiiittle bit before halfway finished. I thought it was... unoriginal, is the best word for it, i guess. I mean, the dialogue and the situation... I would've treated it as a 'no plot, just sex' kinda fic but the fact that the sex scene wasn't original-sounding and wasn't unique for the characters kinda.. turned me off completely.

I thought I'd just giggle at how you came up with that after looking at a window in your lecture hall. xD Inspiration for awkward things hits you at the most *unsuitable* times, doesn't it?

The End.

I love KidxLaw fanfic. This was awesome. that poor cleaner though haha. I bet it does happen IRL though.

Well, I like this much more than Critical Hit. Though you can't really compare them.

The whole set up is just thrilling... I need more of this!

Poor cleaner. He's really got a nasty job to do now. Not nice of Law to just leave without cleaning. XDD

Wow, I am totally ashamed of myself. I seem to have missed you posting another amazing Fic! Gah! What is wrong with me! Bad Sarah! Bad!

You're one of the few people who actually know how to write a good LawXKidd fic. I really enjoyed that it was AU! They were never too OOC as well! And the...(blushes) Sex scene was quite exhilarating as well...

It's nice to know there's someone out there who is just as obsessed with this Manga and couple as I am!

Thank you for for a wonderful read! I look forward to another one of your stories!

Loved this one! Adorably sexy! I can't think of anything else to say except that you're amazing.

I knew someone would see them go at it. Anyway, cute pairing! I really like this fic! Good work, nice grammar, clean sentence structure! Its all good!

HOT! :)

Yessssssassssss

I am wriggling in front of my keyboard right now, if only you could see the happiness in my face right now. xDDD

Oh you must write more one-shots of this couple because 1 I am a majour supporter of these two, and two this was a fabulous one shot. I loved it :D

and I must say I half expected Kidd to go for engineering yeah *snigger*

*lol* Hot and amusing at the same time! , (so,the cleaner did saw the whole thing from the beginning?)

KiddLaw is so made for each other..;) Hope u will write more fics of them in the future..3