So today i was walking around and then suddenly i thought, "do u remember that awesome hetalia fanfic u read three years ago?"

And bam i read all this in one sitting.

And honestly, this is one of my FAVOURITE if not my FAVOURITE hetalia fanfic.

The plot is amazing. The way you use fb text to deliver this story is brilliant and I applaud you for it. That the story stayed with me for three years.

I haven't read a single hetalia fanfic in three years but I thought i'd read yours to get back into the fandom because the way you write the characters and think of these plots is fantastic!

So thank you for this awesome story and I wish you'd continue.

OMG. Please post more of this! It's a really good story so far!

Note on Icelandic surnames:
It's not the same as English surnames. They will literally mean "[name] son/daughter of [name]". So, technically, Iceland's/Brynja's name means "Brynja son of Stile". (Stile is the name of the father.) You don't want that, don't you? I believe the correct way to name a genderbent Iceland would be Bryjna Steilsdóttir (which means "Brynja daughter of Steil").
[Sometimes, the mother's name would be used in place of the father's, but let's not go there.]

Thanks ;)

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Alrighty! In that case, throw in as much AmeriPan fanservice as you want.
On a darker note... What's gonna happen to Korea-chan!? T_T T_T Stay alive Young Soo, Stay alive. *nodes solemnly*

Uuum, for the other possible pairings, would some AmeriPan(America/Japan) be possible? Pretty please?

Agh, I can't read anymore, but I love this :D *will finish later*

Oooh, yay! Great update! I'm liking the drama a lot. :)

Dude, it's obviously General Winter ;)

Anyways, I want to correct something, if I may: ''أراكم قريبا ، ذلك الحين.'' c - that is wrong; meaning and grammatically wrong. Sorry, I'm not from Egypt but I am from an Arabic country(Kuwait), and I was super excited when someone wrote in Arabic. I can finally correct something and feel proud. Yay! Anyhow. The language is read from right to left unlike English so I can understand this accidental mistake. So the fullstop should be at left side of the sentence, that's what's grammatically wrong, the comma is correct, but just delet the space between ''قريبا'' and the comma, and that will end my quite annoying Grammatic correction. And what you wrote is translated to, ''I'll see you soon, that's now.'' which makes half-sense. I think you're trying to say ''I'll see you later.'' or ''Goodbye.'' The perfect words for that in Arabic (not the Egyption slang) would be: .معا السلاما But if you want the Egyption slang, I am quite sure since I watch some Egyption comedy, it's: .السلام عليكم It is also used as ''Hello'' but they also use it as the opposite meaning. So pick one of these if you're not lazy to edit. lol I'm Sorry. Gosh. I think I was kind of rude. I'm sorry. T.T

Anyways! Damn, I loved this chapter, not only do we get new characters but we're close to the Tsundere Unite arc, and personally I'm just excited about that because 1. I can't wait for more jealous France ;D 3. I love when those two little Tsundere's interact. 3. After it finishes we'll get some Bad Touch Trio and you have no idea how I love those three. Especially when my favourite member is genderbended. Who's your favourite? Personally, while I'm reading your fanfic I think it's Gilbert, even though this chapter was mostly about our little adorable Spain

And as usual, your name picks are beautiful. I really adore your taste. :)

I don't have an account . so I'm just reviewing

So I was slightly wondering if using Natalia was a mistake or intended?

You know, because she's Nikita and male in this fanfiction?

No offense intended or anything, just pointing out something I noticed.

Im reading this chapter and the first thing i think of while they investigate the bonnefoy house is...

"where do they find time to update these statuses and message each other?" they kinda just walk around the house messaging? lol

and it seems they all have 3g networks because they all seem to have wi-fi or internet connection in this old house. it's amazing 3

great story so far :) im enjoying the read

~linny

Okay. Not gonna lie. I only took a real foreign language in 6th grade and that was spanish, so I know mal means bad. I stuck with latin, which actually is not useful in every day life. And I'm too lazy at the moment to even google translate all the non-english-ness. But I'm sure you'll just explain it in the next chapter. Yeah. I'm liking all these Latin/South American/etc countries. Even if keeping all the names straight hurts my head sometimes.

AND AMELIA. AMELIA MAKES MY DAY ALL THE TIME.

Also. SIGH. COUSINS. Way to ruin my not-entirely-crack-but-yeah-it-is-ship. It's okay. I'll fight through the pain and everything.

So... um, Mr. Hacker-dude... why so violent? A sad childhood, perhaps? Maybe a harsh break-up? Domestic violence? A falling-out with your best friend? I can recommend a good therapist.

OMG! OMGOMGOMG!

ROMANIA!

SQUEE!

I love Romania too THANK YOU FOR INCLUDING HIM OMG ILY! :D

I can't wait for Romania to properly introduced! C:

Also, I feel like such a frickin' idiot... you know how I said I knew who the girl was from last chapter? And that I had a good idea of who the hacker was? Yeah, well me memory frickin' sucks because I CAN'T REMEMBER WHAT MY THEORIES WERE. GAH!

I seriously need to start writing this stuff down...

I think I remember who I thought the girl was, though. :D I'm going to re-read the last chapter now and hope I spark my memory back. XP

I like the introduction of new characters! As Peter said: FRESH MEAT! Muhahaha.

I kinda find the thought of fem!Cuba scary, though... O-O'

And OH, YES! That's an awesome idea! (About Iceland/US). It would even be more fun that way, I think. xD

And pffft, who are you kidding? This is Hetalia. EVERYONE is a Launcher Of A Thousand Ships. XDDD

Well, it might make you feel better but if I thought I knew what was finally going on last chapter, I'm totally confused again. XD Way to throw me off!

Seriously, I'm so annoyed at myself for forgetting - OH. OH MY GOD OH MY GOD! EEEE! I FINALLY REMEMBER AGAIN! OMG! :D I remember what my guesses were last chapter! It suddenly just came back to me. xD

I am happy now.

Hmm, after reading this chapter it would seem that I'm on the right track about Gilbert... I doubt I'm right, per se, because my deduction skills SUCK, but I feel quite proud to be the only one to have picked up on the 'episodes' thing, for example. :D So yeahhh.

Thanks for updating! 8) Everything's getting veryyy interesting.

BUT I AGREE WITH UKRAINE YOU SHOULD JUST TELL ME :D lollll

Excuse me while I hit myself over and over in the head for not realizing.

THIS WAS SO ARGHHH GENERAL WINTER

IT EVEN HAD THANATOS WINTER

WINTER WINTER WINTER HOW DID I NOT GUESS

Okay, really great chapter! No, Yao, you must stay afloat! Don't die on us. :( It seems there's a bit of history! I'm interested.