This is very original, and cute. I love this!

Really luked this! It ws totally different from most of the other fanfics and was really creative :D

Who is the girl/guy?

I loved the third person or well, technically first person, but it was fantastic ! Can you make a second one ? Please !

Kristin Michelle A

I love it! It's really cute and unique!

this is great! i like how you can get what's happening without the full story.

Ooooh, coolie one-shot! :D

Zach and Cammie are like, the BEST couple ever! :D

Anyways, very well written!

I've always wondered if there was such thing as second person POV, I guess there is! :)

~GallagherGirlMacey:)

this is soooo adorable, i love it!

Your fic has an interesting plot line, written in a POV that isn't usually used, and has that bit of mystery tied in.

Amazing piece. :)

This is soo cute! I cannot believe that something similar to this happened in real life; you're so lucky to witness it. Thanks! (:

so, wow.

this was beautifully written, interesting plot, amazing POV, and slightly complicated -but in the good way.

it was interesting because it was short, but your characters were well described even from the POV of someone else. The POV actually made it beautifully written and i think your writing is amazing :D

fantastic job!

:P

This was really cute. I loved how you wrote it from a random bus takers perspective.

This is goode. :D Not much Gallagher Girls oneshots out there like this one. :) GOODE JOB! XD

you should make this a complete story! please! you'll make me suuuper happy!