| Reviews for Untouchable |
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LadyArcana81 chapter 1 . 2/28/2011 too cool, I'll have to check out that other cross over with rainbow brite. I am also a subscriber to the everyone in rainbow land never ages. You might need to work on making starlight more arrogant though, you left out him saying "I am starlight, the most magnificant flying horse in the entire galaxy." or some such permutation. He is always boasting about himself every episode, except for this new bland version of him, "ecch!" I don't need to tell you the new version of rainbow brite is an absurd anorexic with a WAND (what's up with that). And the color crystals now grow on trees! Then the coup de shame. The source of all ethnicity in the cartoon is wiped out! They erased the color kids. I can see making them less imporant but not wiping them out! They served an important purpose of running and protecting rainow land when their mighty leader is doing her primary job. |
AplexPrime0000 chapter 1 . 2/27/2011 Nice crossover. Is this story have more chapters? |