i loved it. both were so in character, good job!

This is such a good one!

Fantastic story. The character voices were spot on and it just made so much sense lol plus the sex was hot yet funny n sweet

Cute?
The correct work escapes me. But I do know I liked it.

Of course I knew that!

I believe in ya!

:)(: Santana's teasing is paying off. Haha..the dialogue in this chapter is awesome. Santana taking it to a new level with the description of what she wants to do. I did like when Rachel spoke against Santana about being gay.

:)(: Santana is a genius. Oh my gosh...I can't stop smiling. The yawn bit is perfect.

:)(: You've created Santana's voice right down to perfection. She even seems a bit tougher than the Santana on the show, and I love that. Haha...I love Rachels check out of Santana.

Ugh...your stories are amazing. I just read your dantanchel on tumblr as well, and your characterizations are just spot on. That really makes the smut all the better to read. Excellent job.

Amazing I loved every word of this

I llol at some of Rachel's comments :D

H-O-T!

Totally awesome story! LOVED Santana here, I mean I could just *hear* her saying everything, so spot-on with her character. And I loved Rachel calling her out on the whole thing, questioning her motives and who she was out to hurt. And that last chapter, HOT!

Okay, so this was hilarious! Loved it.