Awwww! so cute I love it. LOL the 'bitch' thing is hilarious. I really like how you portrayed these two especially michelle it reminded me of when she was a face and I liked her a alot then, but once she went heel and started antagonizing my Mickie I forgot about face Michelle and started to dislike her. But all in all this is a good, cute well written fic, you've done it yet again silverturtle congrats!

Echokid14

*sqibbles* ! awww!

Very very sweet. It was hard to watch them break up.

This was utterly cute.

First off I'd like to say that I loved this story. You really captured both of their characters and emotions very well. I really wish there were more LayCool stories. I am a 20 year old heterosexual male and I would just like to say that WWE spliting up LayCool also breaks my heart as they were one of the best storylines that Smackdown! has had with the other being Drew and Kelly which doesn't seem to have enough fanfics either *sigh*. I haven't read any of your other work but I will and hopefully you might come back to LayCool in the future. Anyways I'm rambling, so job well done and thanks for writing it.

Steele Xeno

I think you should write a new LayCool story every day. They are always perfect in your hands. Flawless, even.

Loved Layla's idea for a code word. So smart yet ridiculous...much like her.

Whole story is great. Superb.

Hahaha Lay and her stomach, cookies! XD

Well first of all from, since their first discussion I expected you to write some fic about them, but you used their more "dramatic" at the time and I liked how you handle it (: When Michelle rejection Layla's hand and put her sad face that was so, wow! Layla really knows how to act or the action really hurt her (U). Well, regarding the powers of seduction, maybe Layla is not as powerful as Michelle says, perhaps only Michelle is very weak XD

Ok no, I hope you write something more about them, I agree with your friend Lody, you're the number 1 in LayCool stories!

Greetings :D

PD: Lay x Chelle! FLAWLESS COUPLE! (L)