The amount of grammar mistakes are suffocating.

Was hoping this would be red x leaf so I'm disappointed to see it's just an OC SMH

So basically this is Pokemon version of Naruto plot. Lol

I see you are trying to force an Itachi Sasuke situation.
Such bs.

Wait, was Red's father an Aura Guardian or Pokemon Poacher? Delia seems sincere, but I feel Ember was also truthful with his brother. Which is it?

I disagree with Red on Leer killing his parents' killer. Leer avenged them, for he didn't kill the killer for the same reason they did to his parents. Of course that's my view. Beliefs on justice, vengeance, revenge, and murder are different in everyone's eyes.

Now I just realized I didnt leave a review. So, Red's challenge of the Elite Four so far. Amazingly written. I just hope that Red would act more mature when out of battle. Also, Red's battle with Lance would also mean Red's rematxh with Kuraisora. So I cant wait for every single chapter that will come out. Hopefully soon though

Just found this and am loving it already. _ Please update soon.

I actually liked how you put Houndoom on his team, it's an interesting twist to the team's complexity. Another great chapter.

I've really enjoyed your story so far. It's complex and compelling in story & character development. I hope you honestly make this into a series with Red and his closest (Charizard and Emily, at the least) going from region to region...but that's just me. Still, amazing job so far.

One down, seven to go ;)
I had to read again the chapters because actually I didn't remember.
By the way being italian i actually can't say if grammar and spelling are fine, sorry about that.
Overall I enjoyed the story, it's pretty light to read and enjoyable. Viridian forest chapter was fun to read too, despite being obviously the part when pikachu got involved. And... spiky eared? Fine to me ;)
I love you giving geodude rock throw... in the early part of a game it would have been a devastating stab move, but in a story it's the right choice to give suspance. Thruth being said I've done the same, only earthquake instead of magnitude :P
I may have something to say about the exposition actually... I'm talking about it being somehow semplicistic and fast paced sometimes... But, god, this is only the fourth chapter, edited two years ago too! xD
So for now I'll just keep on reading, because the thing I'm most curious about is Red developement :P

why won't you continue this story!

Great chapter and plot

Kind of expected Kuraisora to come back but not Joey. The date between Red and Emily was alright I guess. And it looks like Red's fight with Kuraisora isn't over just yet. Can't wait to see the next chapter

Truly an exciting chapter. Great story, I haven't commented on this one yet and wow it has been an exciting read. I'm not sure why this story doesn't get as much attention as the other stories like this one, but I'm truly enjoying it!