This was so beautifully written and really sexy! I love this and I wonder how it would be with Mirana being in charge;) wonderful writing as ALWAYS

I really like this one-shot. It's just so full of descriptive adjectives and great wording with variations, that is making this story really, REALLY hot. I had to gulp a few times myself xD
And I also like that this isn't simply a kinky smut but that you always mentioned again how Alice does this for Mirana's good and not because she is some control-hungry dominant or something like that.
Really great, thank you :3

Hm...This was good. I understand how Alice was the dominant one, but it would be interesting to see it the other way around.

Beautiful. I really loved this story. It was even better than the Dark Room, if I may say so.

The fact is, not enough people realize the darkness in Mirana. As Anne Hathaway herself noted of her: "Cute but psycho. Things even out" and also "She really likes the dark side, but she's so scared of going too far into it that she's made everything appear very light and happy. But she's living in that place out of fear that she won't be able to control herself."

Not enough people realize this, and eve fewer manage to characterize it properly. Even if they so manage, Alice's response to this is also hard. The reason I like these stories so much is because you manage this fact.

To my mind, there are two types of kinky stories - there are those where I enjoy the idea of the characters having kinky sex, and those where more important than the sex is the way the relationship needs/demands/utilizes the kinky sex to become better and stronger. This story is obviously of the latter kind, even if Alice and Mirana enjoy it. And that is what is so beautiful about the story: the immaculateness of the relationship between Mirana and Alice, even where pain and pleasure are needed and combined.

I hope to see more of these stories in the future.

ALWAYS a favorite. Amaaaaazing.

This is very lovely! I think that those who love accept the person they love unconditionally and that they would accept all the needs. Plus, they would accept all the light and all the dark. Alice is the perfect lover/champion for Mirana and Alice has the perfect lover in Mirana. She gives Alice not only love, but purpose and a way to be a champion all the time.

The loving is beautiful and the trust pops out first and foremost. This is amazing. :)