nice :)

Very well written. Thanks for sharing. Hope to read more of your work

Very cute story.

This was a really cute story.

Good job!

Hi dear, I really fall in love with this story, I read it like 100 time already, but its still my fav story ever. Thanks for creating such a wonderful story. Make some more. Heh...

I really loved this story! It is nice to see a story where Spock is the one sure about the relationship.

Wow! I loved this so much!

The crayons and the lights were brilliant. xD That is CLEARLY an accurate depiction of Kirk's brain.

Also, this dialogue snippet made me laugh:

"Can I tell you something? As my BFF? Not my doctor?"

"Sure. But don't call me that," Bones said.

"You aren't my BFF?"

I imagine Kirk with a sad, mock puppy-dog expression.

Great job. I wish there was more to it

Awesome story!

I loved it!

great chapter can't wait for more so please update again and soon.

Jim's aching feelings really came across. I like the use of crayons - the fort was really good.

I like the way Spock held onto Bones to have a way back out.

I especially like the happy ending.

I was really glad to see you posted this.

Absolutely wonderful. I loved the lights and crayons ... somehow it's just fitting. Nice work with a Jim who is so terrified of the thought of losing Spock, that he decides it's better not to be with him at all. Thank goodness everyone else is a bit wiser.

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Girl, for lack of better adjective in the English language that Jim is a complete idiot .. xD

The whole cute Spock aside from him and without realizing it? ohhh God ...

Fic perfect as always!

Kisses

Karla Malfoy