That was utterly amazing! They were so in character and I like this dark and perverted Roy vs and innocent and young Alphonse. The perfect pairing. Al was so cute flushing and reacting that way. This goes straight to my favs.

XD I'm dying XD This was so hot.

I just wanna say, that no matter how many times I read this, I still love it. Like, a lot. And I kinda wish there was some sort of second chapter or sequel to this XD because I wanna know what else Roy would have in store for him. There arnt alot of RoyAl fics and it makes me sad because it's my fave ship for FMA. Anyways, I love it, no matter how many times I read it.

It was funny how big of an ass (no pun intended) Roy was; that being said it was also hot! I love how Mustang just uses everyone for his own benefit. Great!

O.o ooooh very dirty that roy scares me just a bit...

This filled all my dreams of this pairing, but i want more.

Love this!