Great fic, so sweet.

cute

I have one of those grins on my face that makes me look like an idiot. And you put it there. Great one shot. :)

Beautifully done!

So I'm currently reading everything you've ever written (with the exception of Crash and Burn because I know I won't survive if it's as good as I know it'll be and it's on hiatus until further notice). This was awesome. So very totally awesome. Just sayin'.

Aww that was extremely well written and verrry sweet. Loved it. Ill be looking out for more of your stuff

So amazing! Don't sell yourself short, that wasn't lame at all. I loved it!

Awww I loved that. I love fluff. I love everything about this story! It was adorable. And for some reason I really loved that you mentioned Java Loft. I also like that Josh took the break up well, because it generally bugs me if he starts yelling and then just ragequits and Kate feels worse about it, haha. And I think I had something else to say but the darn thing wouldn't let me review until I refreshed it, so I'll just finish by saying that it was amazing and I loved it. _

This was so cute and I enjoyed it.

However I do have one issue, and I've noticed it in a few of your fics - you have Kate crying too often. Kate hardly EVER cries, and she'll generally try and hide it from everybody, so to have her sobbing in front of Castle twice in one short fic is a bit much.

But I still enjoyed it. :D

THIS IS GOOD. LIKE REALLY, REALLY, REALLY GOOD.

I love it! (l) it's really awesom (: I wish it had gone this kind of way , especially the end! :d

I loved that piece. What I loved best about it was how you kept Caskett's characteristic banter in there, but you brought them together without it being too cheesy and cliche. It was fresh, and it still had the kick we all love about the two. Great job. :)

*sigh* If only, right? If only this had been how it happened.

Anyways, I can tell you straight away that you are definitely not lacking in writing skills. That's for sure. But I'm going to give some feedback now, which I know can be crap to hear at first because it really doesn't make you feel great, but I usually find that these types of comments are ones I usually end up appreciating the most. So please don't hate me.

So firstly there were maybe a few spots where the sentences didn't quite flow right, but I find that often happens because you as the writer will read one of your stories in a slightly different way (pace-wise etc) to how an average reader will. My suggestion for that is reading through again and again, usually with a gap of a day or so in between. That usually helps me to be able to read it in a slightly different way each time so I can see bits that could be improved.

Also, I wonder if you use some kind of thesaurus? Like synonyms in Word? Because I think there are a couple of words there that do sort of describe what you're trying to say but that might not be quite the right word for the context.

Other than that, I have to say that, although I did like it in a lot of ways, I wasn't a very big fan of the make-out scene. I don't know, I'm just like a ridiculous romantic so I like to describe kissing in a 'pretty' way (even though I know the actual act is really anything but! haha) But I just feel that some words don't really fit in a description of a kiss. Like "crashing", which is a word that brings mental images more associated with car wrecks than a passionate kiss.

Anyway, that said, I actually did really enjoy this :)

Hope I was at least minutely helpful, and I do plan on reading your other fics soon (unless you decide that you'd rather I didn't haha)

-Laura

PS- Oh, and by the way, loved that you made Josh into a bit of an annoying ass-clown. Gotta love the Josh hate.

simply amazing.

Awww... Nicely done!