I love you writing style. Steampunk KuroxFai 3

So beautiful. Thanks for writing! And I think the slight change in writing is nice, symbolizing a growth in the two of them. Well done.

Cute! This is good! Not really familiar with steampunk, but I like the interactions between Fai and Kurogane.

This is cool it makes me want to watch the anime lol

Awww great story! :)

this was a good read, really liked the world you created! one thing that confused me though : why did Fai's magic hurt him?

Awesome love how you made it where Fai can take care of himself and that he doesnt always need Kurogane to save him.

wow. I have no words, as it was too beautiful and took my breath away. Amazing piece of art! :)

very interesting so far, i hope Kurogane beats Yaro.

oh i dont really know if in a true steampunk society they had IVs or pills but i may be mistaken, its still very steampunk though so good job!

you have succeeded in getting a person who usually hates yaoi to actually liking this story, oh man! like i said i have to make KuroFai an exception here, its so cute!

i cant believe it, i actually like this a lot! *sigh* i dont like Yaoi, never did and still dont but...for some reason i cant help but make an exception for KuroFai, cause Fai waking up in Kurogane's arms is just...too adorable! this is sooooo adorable and your fine, i love steampunk a lot which is why i looked up Tsubasa Chronicle Steampunk in Google. man i gotta keep reading.

Ah, I do like this story. The problem is that at the end of the series Fai has given up all the magic in the eye that wasn't taken from him-the eye that brings him closer to death-for Krogane's arm. His other eye, the one that was used by Syaoran and eventually returned to him doesn't bring him closer to death but grows more powerful with use-it's this eye that he has at the end of the series.

Also: Dreads are usually very large and though smaller ones are possible it sounds more like you were talking about corn rows. Look them both up on google.

The pure amount of steampunk-y KuroFai goodness in this story is worthy of some kind of fluff award. Or a Pulitzer. You, my dear, are a genius!

THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU! This has to be one of my favorite Tsubasa stories now! It was so well written and the story was so unique and fun! I loved how you portrayed everyone and how everyone stayed in canon. Yaro was such a great villian and I enjoyed every second! The emotions you portrayed always caught me. I wanted to punch out Yaro too along with Kuro! Thank you for this story again! I sincerely enjoyed staying up until 6am to read this even though I had to get up at 7:45am. It was worth it! :) I keep reading parts of it over and over again and I am sure I will reread the story very soon! :) THANK YOU!

XD I loved it! You were so detailed about all the mechanics and steampunk aspects of the story I'm impressed.

Kurogane and Fai! You are BOTH IDIOTS! XD It got really intense for me at some parts (especially when you wrote "did it occur to Kurogane that he'd missed something crucial in that conversation") and that part made me throw my hand sup in the air and shout

"You're hopeless! You're both utterly hopeless!"

This was so much fun to read! Awesome!