WOW just wow! I knew you were good, but not THIS good! You have to keep writing!

I really loved it

Love it simply amazing! I think you have a gift for this kind of stuff

Wow! What an amazing piece! Keep writing!

Gosh, I'm just amazed. You say that English is your second language, and yet you speak it like a pro. Seriously.

and not just that. Your story skills are amazing. I love the clear way in which you display thoughts.

And my favorite part of the story was when everyone in the room was hypnotized by Wanda's beauty. I had never imagined it like that because I'd always thought that Ian, Jamie, and a few others had been the only ones to see Wanda like that but I like your version better because it shows how much these humans have changed and improved.

As always, I love your writing. :)

ladaane

i really liked it. i hope that you will make this more than one chapter. looking ofrward to it.