All I know is that the legal age to drink in Japan is 20. Unless that has changed.

Keep up the good work,

Shawn H.

I would say mystery/romance/humor!

Great story keep it up!

Shawn H.

I can't even start expressing awe at your work. You made Vegeta and Piccolo into a team. This is what shonen stories are all about.

This was one of the best reads...,

J'aime.

an excellent story

That was pretty cute! Thanks for the fun ride! :D

Vegeta, professional Privet Investigator! Works until the case is solved! Or he gets hungry... Or Kakorott wants to spar... Or the Woman complains that he needs to spend more time with the brat... Or he gets board...

*cries* They didn't wear silly costumes. YOUR STORY IS DEAD TO ME! Hahah, just kidding. I want to see Vegita's idea of "helping".

If Chichi, Goku, and Goten don't show up in stupid costumes to protect their identity, I will be very, very sad.

Great story. Loved the part where Vegeta and Piccolo teamed up to investigate the murder.

I loved this story! I can't really describe why, but one of the reasons is for the cute Gh/Vi scenes. X3

T-T I loved the ending to this chapter...

I enjoyed reading this very much, though the trap in the end was kinda... overdone? And the baddie was long since with the police before they were rescued... I wouldn't call it anticlimatic (it was anything but), however, you stretched the story there a bit too much for my liking. The rest though is loveable! I like the idea, and how Gohan went along to jail because of his morales... and then almost went crazy thanks to his experiences. Seems very likely to me, and you did a good job writing it. Oh, and you did fabulous foreshadowing in the first two chapters, without letting the reader now that it was necessary parts for the rest of the story! Wonderful work. *faves*

Now, onto reading its sequels...

Lolchen

Good story, I enjoyed it very much.