| Reviews for Flaws |
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annabeth669 chapter 1 . 5/31/2014 Oooh love iiit! This is one of the few CrowfeatherXLeafpool fanfics that I actually like. Awesome! |
Raven13 chapter 1 . 12/6/2011 amazing! love leafpool and crowfeather! |
leafpool chapter 1 . 5/12/2011 ! |
StormWolf77 chapter 1 . 5/8/2011 *squels thAt was soo cute! What's with firexcinder though? Oh well I still like it :) |
shel-belle chapter 1 . 4/29/2011 It's soo good! That's why I hate one-shots. And there's a few grammar mistakes like commas. And its great! |
skylark88 chapter 1 . 4/25/2011 WOW! I'm speechless! That was amazing! |
memesandbrokendreamslmaokai chapter 1 . 4/20/2011 WOAH...YOU ARE AN AMAZING WRITER! if only the actual series could be like this... |
Pencil37 chapter 1 . 4/10/2011 Yay! A happy ending for Leafpool and Crowfeather! So they never found out that Squirrelflight and Brambleclaw weren't the real parents of the Three right? I wish this weren't a one-shot, but... it ended perfectly. And you don't always get that with stories. Good job! -Pencil37 |
Swiftbreeze chapter 1 . 4/5/2011 Awwwwwwwwwwwwww. That was soo touching! I really like the ending. Good Job and I hope you write even more soon! -Swiftbreeze |
Crowfeather's girl chapter 1 . 3/30/2011 good story :) |
AnimeNeko12 chapter 1 . 3/8/2011 That was the greatest Leafpoolxcrowfeather story ever! So romantic. That was super good for a Oneshot! |
Lifepaw chapter 1 . 3/5/2011 This is the best love story of Croefeather and Leafpool I read so far! Flaws is such a romantic story. _ |
FatKatLover chapter 1 . 3/4/2011 I really like it! good story! a lot like mine... but then you wrote your first... lol :) |
Natureboy3 chapter 1 . 3/1/2011 Awesome! That is exactly what should have happened. Love the emotion. :) Nice work. |
Proverbial Sunset chapter 1 . 2/28/2011 Aw, cute! |