Reviews for Flaws
annabeth669 chapter 1 . 5/31/2014
Oooh love iiit! This is one of the few CrowfeatherXLeafpool fanfics that I actually like. Awesome!
Raven13 chapter 1 . 12/6/2011
amazing!

love leafpool and crowfeather!
leafpool chapter 1 . 5/12/2011
!
StormWolf77 chapter 1 . 5/8/2011
*squels thAt was soo cute! What's with firexcinder though? Oh well I still like it :)
shel-belle chapter 1 . 4/29/2011
It's soo good!

That's why I hate one-shots.

And there's a few grammar mistakes like commas.

And its great!
skylark88 chapter 1 . 4/25/2011
WOW! I'm speechless! That was amazing!
memesandbrokendreamslmaokai chapter 1 . 4/20/2011
WOAH...YOU ARE AN AMAZING WRITER! if only the actual series could be like this...
Pencil37 chapter 1 . 4/10/2011
Yay! A happy ending for Leafpool and Crowfeather!

So they never found out that Squirrelflight and Brambleclaw weren't the real parents of the Three right?

I wish this weren't a one-shot, but... it ended perfectly. And you don't always get that with stories.

Good job!

-Pencil37
Swiftbreeze chapter 1 . 4/5/2011
Awwwwwwwwwwwwww.

That was soo touching!

I really like the ending.

Good Job and I hope you write even more soon!

-Swiftbreeze
Crowfeather's girl chapter 1 . 3/30/2011
good story :)
AnimeNeko12 chapter 1 . 3/8/2011
That was the greatest Leafpoolxcrowfeather story ever! So romantic. That was super good for a Oneshot!
Lifepaw chapter 1 . 3/5/2011
This is the best love story of Croefeather and Leafpool I read so far! Flaws is such a romantic story. _
FatKatLover chapter 1 . 3/4/2011
I really like it! good story! a lot like mine... but then you wrote your first... lol :)
Natureboy3 chapter 1 . 3/1/2011
Awesome! That is exactly what should have happened. Love the emotion. :) Nice work.
Proverbial Sunset chapter 1 . 2/28/2011
Aw, cute!
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