One of my first thoughts is you write very professionally, it makes this really nice to read. A second thought was... did you really sneak yourself into your own story? I don't mean that in a harsh way, just thought it was funny.

You're doing a good job giving all the OC's some space/time in the spotlight. I enjoyed reading about them and getting to know everyone a little more. This will be a long story so it's good to create a decent foundation which you've done.

Keep up the good work, I'll read as I can and review.

This is going pretty well. I'm liking the story. I know you're probably done with the story by now, seeing as the last update time, but I'm looking forward to reading the rest of this. Thank you for taking the time to write it.

1. Misty literally forced her
company onto Ash
She followed him all over hell
and creation basically harassing
him nonstop about her stupid
bike. I mean, sure, her bike was
destroyed and she had every
right to be upset about it, but

Update please.

Bubble Beam is a water type move. Pikachu’s an electric type. Water moves have no effect on electric types

I wonder why the next chapter on this ain't up yet?

I miss this story. It is one of my favorite stories on here and i can never really get tired of reading it. All the best

Did you really have to make Aaml like that?

I wish you make another chapter soon

psychic type is not week to poison type it's the other way around

Amazing.I've been waiting for this chapter for EVER.
But I understand...
R.I.P.
Monty Oum
and
Evan's Computer
I hope you feel better soon...

Lol, I liked Natalie riding on Seviper. It gives me a funny mental image. -

And don't worry too much about not updating fast enough... Half of the fics I follow get updated like once a year, or not at all. :'(

Great chapter, 'twas cool and action packed! :D

-KrazyKat101

Hey, man. It's been a while.

I didn't know you were interested in Rooster Teeth's work. I myself mostly watch RvB, but I've seen RWBY as well. Losing Monty was a huge. I just hope everyone else at Rooster Teeth can carry on his legacy. I'm sure it's what he'd want.

Love the chapter. It looks like the PTA is finally getting the upper hand, but when it comes to Team Rocket that can be wishful thinking. I'm looking forward to seeing how the next chapter plays out.

Great work! It was nice to see Ashley again. This is a very excellent story so far! Keep up the great work!

Finally caught up! Dat kiss thoooooo you have been holding it out on us for a long time Evan. Lol but these last few chapters r awesome! When is a the next update?