Reviews for In Control
Guest chapter 1 . 10/22/2018
And so ends the relationship.
Guest chapter 1 . 3/1/2017
Are you going to write more?
shugokage chapter 1 . 6/13/2015
Definitely an unique story!
Thizkid chapter 1 . 4/20/2015
This story was awesome. You should really countinue. Probably making up something on hw hiccup would feel the next morning. Meanwhile i suggest u make hiccup look a little bit awesome.
Guest chapter 1 . 2/20/2015
Please make more chapters
Guest chapter 1 . 8/2/2014
That was rough

I guess
Guest chapter 1 . 8/2/2014
I found it interesting at 2 am ( I know )
Guest chapter 1 . 7/23/2014
This is so not like Hiccup or Astrid you changed them... and I didn't like it...
Guest chapter 1 . 7/12/2014
She basically raped him
Meyer331 chapter 1 . 1/29/2014
Holy hell. I felt so bad for Hiccup. Believe it or not, I kind of follow his philosophy, wait till their married, wait a while until their ready, then came Astrid. Have fun raising the baby alone bitch!
coi665 chapter 1 . 1/17/2013
poor Hiccup
DaBlackVegeta chapter 1 . 1/9/2013
Nah...this is...this is no good. Good writing, bad story...
anythingforl-l-love chapter 1 . 12/1/2012
Dammit Hiccup Deal with it!
TeQWo CoNViX chapter 1 . 11/26/2012
Wow, and here I figured she might wake up and realized she raped him, then she'd go crying to him that she'd be sorry or something. Oh well, dark definitely suited this story. Nice job.
mesampepjz chapter 1 . 11/4/2012
who forces someone to have sex with them?
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