Really good I’ve reread this so many times over in the past and now

One the best GaaraxNaruto Lemon’s I’ve ever read in my life!

*Frenchman laugh* Ohohohoho hohohoh

its pretty good

Oh, it was very good! I would have never imagined such use of sand powers - very creative and sensual. It worked so very well in this fic. Love the pairing, too.

This is what we gaanaru fans are looking for, hot descriptive sex with using sand and powers or is that just me. Olson May I recommend using sand as a dick next chapter please.

I honestly cannot believe this is you’re first it’s pretty damn awesome, the best naruto fanfic ever

This is so good and so sexy. Thank you for this pairing as there are not a lot of ganaru pairings. The fics i have found with this pairing are all teen rated. Bummer

This is hotter and kinkier than most smut written by people who have been writing smut for years.
The inspired use of Garra's abilities is the kinkiest thing I have ever seen in the Naruto fandom.

Oh my god I cannot believe you could write so perfectly at the first attempt! This is one of the best lemons I've read, and I've read many. This is amazing! Kudos!

Good

For a first fanfic, this is really good, especially for someone who's never written lemon before. Good job on this and keep up the good work!

BEAUTIFUL FREAKING YESSS

Its been years since I first read this but I still come back to it like... Once or twice a year hahaha I actually read this when I just started writing fanfics so needless to say, your work was one of the first few fanfics I read that inspired me (even if it was a PWP hahaha) anyway, thank you so much for writing this and I hope you're still out there, writing to your heart's desire.

I believe you have great experience may it be reading or engaging in smutty activities ;) which made you able to write it well for your first time . So good job ) .