ROTFLMAO, I swear this makes me laugh-cry harder every time I read it. (Wipes eye.)

Wait, Bleach-verse? What Bleach-verse? I never saw any Bleach-verse! Alrye-nee, what are you hiding from me~? (Suspicious look like Invader Zim)

Nee-san, you have absolutely no idea how much I adore this fic, I swear I've read it about twenty times at this point!

And now I'm reading it again.

#NoShame.

Great story! The characters were a little oc also the ending and a couple other parts of the story were kind of confusing and rushed. But overall you did a great job and it was a funny, cute and enjoyable read. :D

hey i thought that the story was great! XD... i totally loved the plot buh i wanted more moments where it showed Yoh & Hao n Yugi & Atem... i also wanted it 2 show Yoh & Yugi talkin as friends ... other than that it was great!

~*pika*~

Hey, guys! Sorry for not reviewing for so long. I got busy with studies, revisions and exams. I've just finished up my exams on last Friday. And I got a part time job washing the dogs in a pet salon on last Saturday and Sunday. So, I didn't have time to read and review. I was surprised The Mayhem is over. Hope you guys don't hate me for not reviewing and didn't told you that I won't be reviewing during my busy weeks. I'll try to make the review as long as I can.

One question. Who's in charge of the weapon and the war creativity? You or Ottawa? I find it very intense. Although I'm not a weapon and war fanatic (although this is the job for my cousin), I don't really mind it that much since I got to see the three famous bitches plus Marco died. Yeah!

And I think I might develop a bit of yaoi fangirl attraction instinct towards YugiXAtem during that lemon although my favorite yaoi is still YohXHao. And I think I might start reading Yugioh fanfics starring Yugi and Atem as well since I have read almost all the SK fanfics starring Yoh and I'm now waiting for updates.

Anyway, I got really confused with the Cradle of Life conversation after the fight on the last chapter. I don't really have much ideas of who is talking to who. Do you mind telling me who were in the conversation?

And Yay! You got Yoh and Yugi pregnant! Hao and Atem are so whipped! The same goes for the other semes! Ukes rock!

I guess that's all for the review. I look forward to read another one of your fanfics made by you and Ottawa as your co-partner. Bye!

Ummm...hi...i really like this story! I usually don't read self-insertion stories but this is really nice. I also like the all around banter and making fun of people and not sole one person. And i REALLY, REALLY LOVED THE KILL OR TEA part. oh and the smex was nice. 'drool' Can't wait for more, update soon please. 'bows, then leaves like a ninja'

HOPE THERE'S MORE SOON

T.I.L.P

Olihime: O_O

Ottawa: Hello? Anyone in there? *snaps her finger in front of Olihime*

Olihime: O_O

Ottawa: *looks at Rye* What's wrong with her?

Rye: *shrugs* Maybe because of the sex scene between Yoh and Hao.

Olihime: KYYAAAAAAHHHH! \(0)/

Ottawa and Rye: *jump* What the-

Olihime: YOHXHAO! *twirling and dancing around with her Pikachu doll (Note that the Pikachu is missing a tail)*

Rye: I think I broke her...

Olihime: Cool! A dog! I like dogs but I love cats the most. What kind of dog is Travis?

Ottawa and Rye: *sweatdrop* You have one terrible mood swings.

Is that why there were no updates in the past few days for not only yours and Ottawa's but for all Shaman King fics? Although I was desperate for updates, at least you know how to cheat the system.

Yes! Finally Tea is dead! No more ugly! Celebrate everybody! One down, two to go! You must be thinking that why there's two when there's only one which is Anna. The other one is Jeanne. I hate her so-called righteous acts.

Thanks for the skit. It's very funny! But aren't you supposed to call a ghostbuster or some kind of supernatural agent instead of the landlord to deal with your perverted talking toilet?

Aww. You tricked me. I thought you will finally kill Tea and Anna in this chapter. *pout*

Luke addressed and picked Yugi up as he was a little kid. Is Luke and Yugi around the same age?

I like the idea Faust carve Tea up! He's perfect for the job!

Sorry for the late review. Busy with assignments. You know they're crazy for giving us so many of these assignments and then after that we need to do presentation. We're not super students! *glare at the stack of papers on my table* As much as I want to burn you Assignment, but that would be a sign of defeat. I will complete you for my name is Olihime! Muahahaha! *my roommate stares at me as if I'm crazy*

Another chance lost for killing the ugly Tea! Aargh! This is so frustrating.

I don't why the first thing that flashed in my brain is Rapunzel when you said to Hao to be glad that you didn't lock Yoh in a tower where Hao couldn't get to him.

Hao: Yohpunzel,Yohpunzel, let down your hair.

Ottawa and Rye: *snickered evilly and poured ice cold water on Hao*

Hao: AAAAHHHHHH! I HATE YOU!

Ottawa and Rye: We love you too, Hao! *laughed maniacally*

A bowl of chili? *imagine Ottawa spewing fire like a dragon* Hihi!

Mida-chan? (sweatdrop) Sounds like a girl's name.

Who's Gandhi? I only know one Gandhi and that's Mahatma Gandhi. Hey, it rhymed!

Aaahh! Killer wolf! Killer wolf! Killer wolf is on the loose! Save Yoh and Yugi first! Then, the others! And then save...(blink and smile evilly)...on second thought, leave the ugly Tea.

Aww, I want Hao to take at least one of those rides. No fair. (pout)

Amidamaru must be very sad if he was being captured by Anna. Please save him!

Kyaa! YohXHao! Its so hot and cute!

Wow! Lyserg is so stubborn almost throughout the conversation. I would have thought that Lyserg would be on the bad's side when I started reading. Then, suddenly, he started to doubt and most probably will be ended up in the good's side.

What is PWP?

Hey! You got another reviewer other than me! Isn't it great? Although it's only one, but who would complain! Congratulations! Hey Silfa! Welcome to the Mayhem!

Love the story! Keep writing!

Bleach Verse? What's that?

Ugh! I'm gonna be sick because of that ugly woman.

And cool! An all-you-can-get-for-free house! Make Hao go for all the rides! You rarely see the pyromaniac ride those! Use Yoh as the bait. Make Yoh use his famous puppy-dog eyes.

You know, I found Yoh and Yugi a little similar with their cute looks and personality. Maybe Yugi could master the puppy-dog eyes as well.