I have read your story a lot of times! It's a shame you dropped it because it's so good! The story is nice, it is well written and the characters are not OOC! I am very curious about how you were going to procede with the rest of the story but I guess I'll never know unfortunately! Thank you for sharing this story with us and I wish you the best! :-)
And I apologize for my english!

Ugh... Why haven't you continued this..?
I'm dying to know what's Nami's purpose exactly and whers their "married" life will lead them?

MORE PLEASE

YEah I cant stop giggling and laughing! Amazing!

You know, I found your words very entertaining. Grammars are good and very descriptive. I follow you :)

Yay an update! Though it was a Lil confusing after so long and so many scene changes but I liked it hope u update a Lil sooner this time hahaha

The long wait did not disappoint. I need more of this.

Oh my god, oh my god, continue, please.
It's so cute 3

I laughed so hard and so much, I swear everyone around me thinks I'm crazy! But that's normal... Right...?:)

Damn. Holy shit bro, i would have freaked if that was me. In fact i wouldn't have even stayed after the first 15 mins had gone bye.

I'd have been like, she's not here, she left me hanging, oh well sayanara.

Amo este fanfic, es una pena que no lo siguieses actualizando.

I would want to that you continue it, pleaseee

i wonder who is aria to nami? a sister? close friend? interesting story tho I wonder what the tracking device nami was given also does? and what exactly did law inject luffy with and what was in the box, i'm also quite curious to see how luffy and the guys are going to handle nami and what nami will do? I look forward to the next chapter!

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It was not lame it was awesome
I liked very much this sentences:

"That didn't matter to him because the thing he found himself taking an interest in was her eyes that was fearlessly staring directly at him.

He didn't know if it was because she lacked guilt or conscience, or she was simply brave, no matter what the reason, he respected the spirit that burned within her eyes."
I totally love Luffy's jiisan:
"Com 'on Luffy, don't be shy! We are all grown up here. We all know you two are going to do a lot more tonight! Bwahahaha!"
I laughed so hard...

So I read the whole thing but left a review on Chapter 1 which seemed to fit best. HOWEVER! When is the next chapter? I can be patient but the anxiety is eating away at me. I already feel like a hollow shell with out that warm fuzzy feeling. :'( Though that might just be the fallout from the delay in my addiction to story. ._.