Wonderful, wonderful story!~!

I just finished reading the whole thing ...basically in one sitting (well, one connection time, throughout the day LOL)

You had some really good funny moments, as well as some very riveting action moments. Well thought out!

Do you have a beta, or are you trying to catch your mistakes yourself? Just wondered. Sometimes I had to re-read to figure out what you were going at, if you left out a word, or typed the wrong word. :) But that didn't keep it from being a fabulous story!

Oh! Oh! I L-O-V-E-D loved it!

~mystikalolo~

Cool Chappie!

great chappie! Loved It!

Whoa!

Okay, I've got a lot to tell you. A lot.

I read this whole fic in about four days (it's a lot to read!) and I really, really enjoyed it. I haven't reviewed it at all though (I feel terrible, but I'll make it up to you) so here we are.

Landon was fantastic. A totally well-developed character. I loved seeing how much he was like Ron and Hermione. He was hilarious throughout.

Charlotte reminds me so much of Hermione (that would be the point, wouldn't it?) She was witty like Hermione too! A really great character who complemented James and Landon perfectly.

Ah, I love James! All charming-like! He seems adorable. Very funny.

Hermione was near perfect. Most things about her were so in-character. Ron was also, of course (seeing as he's my favourite character) lovely!

I really liked the plot of this. It was well-told and everything!

Gosh, Landon's smart, I wish I could've been that smart at eleven!

There were a few little things about it, on the whole, that annoyed me a bit though.

Like, the house elves. I mean, Hermione was so strongly against the idea of having/owning a house elf so why she would have one in her house amazed me (whether she didn't let them do 'too' much work, or not) it was the whole point of the matter. It just seemed like it went against everything she stood for. As well as the nanny person (Christina) it just seemed a bit overly-rich-y to me.

Oh yes, and maybe it was just me, but I thought the topic of death was handled so loosely on the whole. It was just made to seem so...simple, as though they were ready and prepared (hardly any chaos) to die.

But, in general, I loved it! Landon, James, and Charlotte make a great "trio" and you can just tell they have so much chemistry! And Landon is hilarious, sarcastic, and witty.

It was great!

Kudos to you!

~Mel

Well, that's all I'm reading today. Believe me, I'll be reading more soon! I love your characterizations - Landon Weasley, scholar with a temper (hehe!), James Potter, wanna-be girl magnet with somewhat of a big head, Charlotte Bronte, pretty much exactly like Landon, only a girl, and therefore and enemy, and of course, your wonderful Ron and Hermione! Love them! Anyway, expect to see more reviews from me in the near future.

Much love,

'Terna

What am I to say? This is goddamn excellent! ) You're a really good writer. I swear to god, I wouldn't be surprised if this got published...

i like it

Great story! have you every thought of writing as a profession? I think you would do great become the next J K Rowling! Anyway...theres only one thing i would change and that is Landon and Charolett should fall in love! THEY WOULD BE SOOO PERFECT! and James can be with Jessie! anyway im gonna go read your other fics c ya lata!

hey, great story so far.

I just thought u otta know that EMILY (not charlotte) Bronte wrote Wuthering Heights

(Up until todays English class I had never heard of the book, but it just so happens that we had a long discussion on it today. Then I came home and began reading this story which mentions the Bronte's every few paragraphs.. i thought it was a funny co-winkiedink*

Several Things to say...

1.) I don't live in England/UK or anywhere near there, I live in America. Lol.. I just wanted to comment on what Charlotte ate with her scrambled eggs. Catsup and Marmalade. I eat mine w/ similar things. Ketchup and Syrup... dunno if marmalade is the same thing as syrup though cuz they put it on there toasts and all.. but I just wanted to say that... hehe... and...

2.) Monty Python Rocks!

3.) Story is great.. unfortunately I have to stop for the moment because it's late and I gotta go to bed. Darn it all! Later...

-Ciara

Hey! This is great! It's really funny and all... well can't be to long on the review cuz I gotta go read the rest! Later...

-Ciara

Nice finish! _

I really like your story so far. I can't wait to see what happens.

OMG. there is no other words... but this IS the best fic ive ever read... seriously, (no pun intented.. lol) but this was so great. you captured humor, (lots! that was awsome) dram, action, and tons of other stuff in less than 20 chapters! jeez... ur good. have u ever thought of writing for real? not fanfic? you'd proly make millions, and be like Ron, retire early, sitting on a small fortune! ;) but i am serious, this is awsome! i hafta go read more of ur stuff now.. (well, not NOW precisly, its about 2 in the morning, thats how good this was, i could NOT stop reading, my mum's gonna kill me... but hey, no more school! yay!) way off topic... :D anywayz, great awsomne spectacular wonderful story, and i cant wait to read more of ur stuff.. layter. *yawn* tootles!

LKoK