Reviews for Zero Existence |
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Edhla chapter 1 . 12/13/2012 This is very confidently written and you have some good little details here. You know what you're doing and I enjoyed reading because of it. Your narrator is strongly drawn and believable. Very few mistakes, though I did catch one: "I was casted back into the fog I stepped out of for lessons." It should be, "I was cast back into the fog I stepped out of for lessons." Anyway, that aside, this was an enjoyable read. Well done. |