Reviews for Zero Existence
Edhla chapter 1 . 12/13/2012
This is very confidently written and you have some good little details here. You know what you're doing and I enjoyed reading because of it. Your narrator is strongly drawn and believable. Very few mistakes, though I did catch one: "I was casted back into the fog I stepped out of for lessons." It should be, "I was cast back into the fog I stepped out of for lessons."

Anyway, that aside, this was an enjoyable read. Well done.