I like your writing style ... it's very much the same as mine D

It's odd. I saw a Let's Play of this game. I didn't really like Blake, but now ... I think is can understand him better now.

And. You didn't hide it good enough, hehe xD

13 Minutes left bevor school .. well,

going to use them for reading ahead ..

Till the next review D

HAN. I HAD NO IDEA YOU WROTE FANFICS.

This is good information, and a good story.

-THISISCAYLEYBTW.

Only the first chapter, but jeez it's stuff like this that makes hours of sifting through the rubbish on this website totally worth it, thanks for the breath of fresh air, you're a wonderful writer and it shows in pretty much every sentence 3

luff heavy rain!

Just found this story yesterday and what a find it was. Better yet, the update today put me in a very good mood; thank you for that.

I find Nicole to be a very likeable character and everybody else seems to stay in character. I'm looking forward to seeing where the story goes from here.

Nooooooo! u haven't even gotten to the romantic parts yet! oh please update soon! i love this! its so much like the game yet different! and of course, having jayden there, well it just makes me happy! keep writing! screw writer's block! haha

what r u talkin about? i loved this chapter! very dramatic! but i'm confused on one part, who hit who first? blake or Jayden? and who said "Come on asshole! I've been waiting for this for a long time!" ? if u can answer that! thanx! oh and please continue with this! i love it! 3 Norman Jayden 3 !

Ah! i love how u described Jayden's 'triptocaine/ARI' effect. it was great! and i was hoping there'd be a story with romance and Jayden involved, thanx! & i love how u write- just like the game! good job! i really hope u continue this, or i might get reaaaaallllly sad with disappointment! UPDATE!

Great stuff man, except this shouldn't exactly be rated T...Heavy Rain is rated MA15 after all.

More please! I am really enjoying your story. Blake is such a creep. lol I want to see what happens next. Are you slashing Norman and Carter together? I would really like to see that and how it's all going to unfold!

I like this, it's good so far! You write Norman and Blake really well too :). Look forward to reading more