you didn't finish it. it's still open ended.

Please go on with this story. It is going somewhere.

Very nicely written, I must say :)

I liked the relationship between two and I think you protrayed them very well.

Great work!

Do you take story requests? Everyone usually writes Shep or Rodney whump fics but this was awesome!

Hi, I wandered back over to this neighborhood for awhile...and found your story. Very nice! I always liked this friendship. Your story shows that even the 'big guy' can have some kind of fear. Now i'm off to read more of your stories. Thanks for writing. :o)DA

Oh, nice catch - I haven't seen any exploration of Ronon's nightmare before. And I really like the Rodney & Ronon friendship here.

Loved it!

No, not complete! This is the beginnings of a good multi-chapter story. How did they get there? How will they get out? Tell us more!

Really enjoyed reading this fic! Rodney helping Ronon and hearing John and Teyla as they try to get to them...all of it was well written and entertaining! Thanks for sharing with us!

Very good. Nice to see Ronon's Cryptonite...;-)

A wonderful story and it felt very in character for the two of them.

I agree w/ McKay about Moby Dick... terrified me of whales for my life too.

Thanks for sharing.

DW

wow talk about a bad situation.