wow,this is great

Oh my god, that was like the beast fanfic ever, loved the ending!

You've got a nice idea, but you could make more of it. Longer, more descriptions e.t.c. But I'm impressed of the idea! I'll wonder, if you let me translate the OS (I'll link you). Please, contact me if you agree. :)

xoxo
sunshannie

You're one of my favorite authors. So that's why I'm asking you this. I don't know why but for some reason I feel like reading a fanfiction about:

Good Luck Charlie-Teddy dies

and

Shake it Up-Flynn dies.

Could you write one of those? I don't know why I want to read that kinda thing but I'm hoping you could do it. :D

Wow, Pen10... I love how you're making mistakes in your flaming review. 'Tye' IS spelled Ty, idiot! Know the facts before you flame, bleephole!

Ok, although I admit Ty might try to give his 13-year-old sister a driving lesson, since he and Deuce are both kind of shady, but Rocky would never agree to it. Also, Cee Cee's mom wouldn't catch them and then not call their mom. Fun mom's only around for up to five seconds, remember? She arrested them and had them grounded for two months for sneaking out to a Gary Wild party, so why wouldn't she be mad about THIS, an ACTUAL CRIME? I know my mom would be furious, and she's way nicer than Cee Cee's mom. The plot was cute but pointless, like a pop song. And that's not necessarily an insult because I personally love pointless pop songs

WELL...

1) This story doesn't have any point. Why write it? There's NO PLOT!

2)tons of mistakes! Like, you forgot periods, spelled things wrong, and p.s. 'Ty' is spelled Tye.

3) I can't really say if I liked it or not. Like I said, it has no point really. I really don't know what to say about it. Sorry.

LOL, teaching a 13 year old how to drive.

Wonderful!

Short but cool :) I loved it.

I do hope you write more Shake it Up stories.

pretty good! D