It was amazing!

Nice one.

I'm really shocked about the end, but I liked reading it. Will there be an update soon? I hope so. Can't wait to read more.

A shocker at the end, Zeit!

damn you cliffie! please update soon! i like where this is going :) but it could be filled out a bit more, the plot developed a bit more perhaps. i understand that it's nice to get the full beginning/premise of the story out in the first chapter but it was somewhat unrealistic to have such a short confrontation at the beginning with naruto/kakashi and then not showing kakashi thinking about it or something. anyway, i'm excited for the update!