Oh my word, this is amazing! I sincerely wish you would update this, the plot is so wonderful and I desperately want to know what happens next!

Oh wow, this story rocks! (Although, I'm not the biggest fan of cussing, no matter how emotional the situation.) I only have a few peeves with the story, but it's your basic grammar and puncuation check. I found dozens of places where comma's would help a lot, and you have the right spellings, but wrong words in a few places (say in the second[?] chapter, where there was a "he's", rather than "he'd", at one point.) But other than that, this story is one that has a great plot and character insight, so I'd love to see it completed! Although I'm not sure why you suddenly ceased updating, I hope that whatever is going on may stop being in your way, and for this story to get back on track. :]

Anyway, here's your score!

Spelling: Superb! It gets thirty points in my book as one of the few fanfics to worry about it.

Plot: Fascinating! A great 'Alternate' based idea that's flowing very nicely. So, a good 90 for originality.

Characters: Intricate! The unoriginal one's don't seem out of character, and the oc's most certainly have great potential and feel awesome to read about. 50 points!

Total score: 170

Well, goodbye, and good luck! :)

This story is so incredably amazing! I beg you from the bottom of my heart, PLEASE continue it!

Ah, I like this! And, YAY! Luke woke up!
I love this idea, the story- AND I HOPE THE PROFESSA BRINGS PAUL TO JUSTICE! JUSTICE I SAY! JUSTI-
(Ignore her. So all in all, this story's great, I like it, are you, by any chance, going to continue this story?)
*added to favorites and follows*
-A.

Loved the story
Full of suspense!

Please continue writing! I read this story three times and I really want to know what's going to happen! Please! It really is such a beautiful and good-written story and it would be a shame of you to abandon it! I and many others enjoy it so much! Please go on writing!

Love this! Please update soon :D

Omg please don't be one of those stories you've given up on, like seriously, you have no idea how infuriating some of these Layton fics are and this is probably the best one I've read! Everyone's in character, and it's realistic AND I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS.

I'm begging you, please update! It's too good a story to give up on :'(

This is really good, please continue

Hey you should work on this more. Dont leave me hangin!

Though it seems like all I've been doing tonight (or to-really-early-morning to be exact), I'm off on another quest to re-kindle fires!
Your readers haven't lost faith in you! We're all still waiting patiently (Well, apart from me. But forgive me for that.) for you to update us with your writing talents!
Please? Just try one chapter! You'll get lots of reviews and favourites and then joy and mIrAcLeS all round!
...Please? n-n

... *puppy eyes* Update?

I'm really sorry to hear about your computer. I know that feel, and it is not a good one.

Mostly I'm just sorry that I can't see how this all plays out just yet. I'm really enjoying this story, and am anxious for the next chapter.

Honestly, the amnesia thing is rather tired, and I'm fairly sure that it doesn't actually work that way. But I'm sure you can pull it off, and Luke puking on Don Palo totally made up for it. There is no fic that cannot be improved by vomiting on the villain.

Good work and keep it up.

Oh my god

This is amazing

I- I don't- this is so awesome. I can't wait to read more. I'm dying to see what Layton's reaction will be to "Alexis" when they meet each other again- though I know that's a LONG way away. Please write more soon, I'm in love with this! _

Jesus, I cried like a little girl! Poor poor poor professor and poor poor poor poor flora for thinking the professor doesn't love her!

Of course he does, dear! Aww, Alexis threw up on don paolo, good for him! Angelia, no its a trick! Don't feel sorry for Stephen!

And professor, how ironic that you will be telling Luke at the shipyard not to make a scene. Seriously, though, I feel bad for the guy...

Update soon, or Justin Beiber will bite a bats head off at his next concert! Abshbsvhbjnjmhud! Excited for update!

MikuLover~