Both cute and hilarious! Nice job!

One small error I noticed:

[Like I said, this guys is so amazingly good-looking.]
I think "guys" should be "guy," and "is" should be "was," since this seems to be written in past tense.

This is such a cute story! I like how you used Cilan and Iris's game counterparts; it's unique, since the idea of them as a couple came from their anime counterparts. :)

Also, you portrayed their personalities spot on, and this story was very well written. :D

Hayley

Well at least they aren't "Rabid"

That was just... perfection! Love the idea, the way you write the characters and the overall feeling of the story.

I hope you'll feel inspired again sometime and write more about this pairing. :)

I REALLY like your story i wish there was more to it.:'(

So cute! It's really great~! :)

I'd expect Cilan to be a bit more shy, but other than that, I loved it!

~ TwisterKirby

First good fanfic i've read about this pairing, it's nice.

OMG i really loved this , T_T so cute :3 haha , to my favs ~~

Haha, this is adoooorable~! XDDD

I loved the way you had Iris talk in this story. Though it irks me a bit that she doesn't sound like Iris from the games; game-vers Iris is a loooot more hyper and energetic. This Iris sounds more like from the anime. X3

But anyways. I loved how Iris was pretty much starstruck~ and I loved how Cilan just comes out of nowhere to talk with her! Screw it, fangirls, leave them alone! _

Mwahaha. Yesh, Iris, you better come back to Cilan and go out on a date. X333

I really enjoyed reading that~ thanks for writing it! :'D

That was funny! A cute oneshot that shows that even the simplest of scenes can have that fluff. It's just hiding. . Lol. Good job.

-Flute.

Cute~~~!

Hey Dannie love this Wishfulshipping on how they would react.

That was great 8D I think it's nice how you wrote the plot in the game world, and I think that's how it would turn out. -faves-

*spazzz* This is so adorable~ .