“Your choice”
“Your life”
LOVE these lines!

Fantastic story I really enjoyed reading this. thanks

I stopped reading after the first sentence had a grammar error...

I love this story. I know that you've wrote this like years ago, but still, I want you to now that I love it so much. Many people do, actually. I'm so happy I stumbled upon it. Yes, it's not perfect and I know you know that. Well, that's not really my point here. I'm really just rumbling now. Actually, I just want you to know how much I appreciate you writing this story a long time ago. It's too good. Thank you for writing this and for sharing this to all of us.

Let me tell you something. I have only completed the first chapter, yet I'm actually considering giving this story a favorite. Yup. Looks promising :D

Thanks for this great story. Keep up the good work.

Can't tell if your OC is incredible dumb at times or incredibly cynical at times.

I looooooved this story! Can't wait to read the sequel. Great work, you're an awesome wrInter.

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Its nonsense and there wasnt damnation it was bliss he finally run away from the cruel world which did nothing but brought him suffering and if you hate him so much why you wrote porn about him? and called this "yaoi"? call it bestiality if you dont think that he is human

W-O-w! A fantastic story, beautifully written, with a lot of patience and talent. I can't wait to read the sequel because this story was one of the best I've ever read, considering that I've read a lot and I almost couldn't stay away from the computer! Congratulations!:)

Was that Jenova?

Yes! Cooking is AWESOME!...Though I do not know how to cook... but I STILL think its awesome! xD

Wow, really good...and I only just read the first chapter! xD

Phew. The way you portray the canon characters is so addicting and mesmerizing. I highly enjoy the first person point of view and how well it helps refine them. Like I can definitely read and think, "Yeah s/he would totally say something like that!"

I'm very glad I clicked on this Anyways:

The very first chapter of this story made me think this was heading into a cliché plot of girl meeting General and after some time finding out they have the hots for each other. Yes it kind of went like that, but my goodness it was so well thought out and well written that I couldn't help but to turn page after page (link after link? xP).

The chapters kept getting longer or shorter depending on what was needed to be said and done, and I found I really like that. There was no pressure to simply fill the chapter with empty words simply to hit a word count.

At first I found Sora annoying with all her crying and all. I seriously wanted to slap this fictional character and tell her to get her crap together. However it makes sense, her words, her thinking, her actions.

If I were taken somewhere in the middle of nowhere with my only source of contact being a murderer I didn't know anything about I think I would start bawling too. I think it helps she knew nothing of him either so she doesn't have expectations of what he should be. It adds to the mystery

There were some symbols like the dreamcatcher and the rabbit that I thought were well placed even if you didn't mean to put them there. Maybe you did or maybe I'm seriously overthinking it. The dreamcatcher stood out because it was bolded and it's the title of the story.

To me it fits perfectly with the dreamlike state of the story, but dreamcatchers are also used to cleanse nightmares. The way this story started out was like a nightmare in a way and by the end there was this sense of acceptance and happiness as if the pieces of the puzzle finally fit together. I do wonder what happened to it though.

In my mind the rabbits represent innocence and child like purity. Sora practically fits in with them because of her ignorance regarding the evil she's living with. When it was at the door/porch I thought it's either reminding her of that innocence or I'm never going to read about it again and she's been (kind of) corrupted.

I didn't read about the rabbit later on so I assume it did in a way symbolize her 'purity' leaving and this is encouraged by the smexy events following afterwards. I read through it pretty fast (it was hard not to) so maybe I missed a bunny sighting hah.

Next on the flow of things. The first chapters of the story I felt were broken and shaggy. The first one where we meet Sora was very meh and I don't know if you were trying to keep it that way so she didn't come off as a Mary Sue. I read SOME (like... 3 .) of your author comments (mainly because it's weird answering things from years ago, you know?) and one of them asserts us of Sora not being a Mary Sue and I remember thinking, Indeed.

Then there was that THING on chapter 7 or 9ish that said 'read back to chapter 7' or something along those lines I think it was a flashback. You said you couldn't do anything else and that's ok, but I felt it kind of stuck out from the flow. And I also think it's fine/acceptable because it's the beginning of the story and...

...it's odd, but now that I'm done reading it the beginning had a very disruptive flow to it and by the end it's smooth, but almost similar. I believe it fits in the scheme of things. To describe what it looks like the beginning is a jagged line morphing into an upwards curve, then they have their fights, a downward curve, then they make up for it, upwards curve and then the end was something unexpected like the beginning, a jagged line.

/\/\/\-/\/\/\ Something like that .'

I realize your main language may not be English and it's not mines either, yet there were many grammatical errors throughout the entire story and if I were to bunch them up in one place I would say I found more of them during the first half of the story. By the second half I was like whatevs man, this story is excellent and I'm pretty sure you're already aware of them.

Sora and Sephiroth's relationship is a turbulent, borderline abusive one. And I find it fascinating. Just reading through all theirs woes and lols and wtf moments makes me want to read it again, if I had the time. :( I absolutely love the way you capture the General's thoughts and feelings all in one. I can see him being completely awkward about everything in a relationship yet yearning to learn.

I see him as someone that grew up to be a killing machine and machines don't have space or time for feelings. In the battlefield it's killed or be killed and that coldness carries into his personality. And his arrogance and pride! Yes! He is THE General and the spotlight has been focused on him for as long as he has known. Why should he treat people nice since he'll get what he wants anyways right?

Then there is the matter with Sora and her past. It's so dramatic and that adds fuel to this fire. I'm glad she showed courage when committing to the relationship. I honestly thought you were going to play with us and have many chapters of her conflicting thoughts regarding her previous relationship, and of her struggling and being panicky and overall teasing us!

I love the way they struggle. I love the way they keep hurting each other. It's addicting. The smexy scenes left sooo much to the imagination. I like that it was written without being TOO descriptive you know? ;) The readers get a general idea and they can map out the details lol!

Thank you so much for posting and sharing this with us! Thank you for listening to your screaming voice. This was an excellent read and I'm looking forward to the sequel.