liked it don't know if they'll be updates but hope so

Just checking back to see if you'd added more.
Fun tale, I do hope you add to it one of these days.

Delightful tale. I do hope you get back to it.

Really interesting ! what about more of this story ?

Fun tale.

I actually really enjoyed this. The two fictions could and do work together as nothing in canon on either series would negate the possibility of the other existing. Too bad it seems you never finished this... would like to see where it went.

cute story, hope you finish it.

this is going to make a great story. please update soon

love the story

right at the end of this chapter i broke into uncontrollable laughter...you gotta love Jack. this story is great and i can't wait for the next chapter...

I just discovered this story and I am very much enjoying it! I loved your carnival idea as a source of both money and information for the Roswell crew. Cool! I hope you will soon be back with more as I very much want to read what happens next!

I like your story, it's very original and i would ike to point that it would be a good idea to give us the date when the story happen.

And i think antar could be in a different galaxy, if they were in the milky way the Ancients would have meet them at some point and antar would have been in the alliance with tha asgard, nox and furling.

Still so much fun. I hope that he sends another message to the rest of the gang before anything happens. I have to imagine that Max would be very interested in meeting Teal'c and Cassie. Hmmm? Maybe sometime?